This Dali Symphony
By NeroMatches
In this city, there is a mouth that yawns during the drug-eyed dawn,
during the hour of its twilight needles and its glass slide crack carried
by the laboratorial pound hungry for veins
staggering wasted along the underage clubhouse parties held every night
in Acropolis,
where the innocent are wrecked with flowing alcohol and where most of the
virgins are auctioned off as victims to drowsy valium and holy hangovers
near the subdivision playgrounds
craving for a little coffee and tonic, praying that they wouldn’t go
home drunk with the smell of filtered cigarettes,
paradoxically afraid of appearing as the incarnates of heroin and lust,
walking like transvestites molested by Warhol on a busy street crawling
with Fords and SUV's
as they drive back to their mothers and fathers, eyes red and mouth gaped
open,
that same mouth in the morning which tastes of stale tobacco and bad wine,
breathing that voice which basks in the lies covering up the malice and
the sin it bathed in last night
using that very same tongue which pierced through the ears of its lovers
and pierced through the shaking lips of anorexic girls wearing skirts
climbing up boondocks of beer bottles and cocktails with vodka mixed with
morphine mixed with death mixed with wisdom and stupidity and artistry
and death again
doomed forever at its first taste with the lingering decapitations of those
who know the travesties of the universe, of those who know the names of
the vagrant stars boozing around the ocean skies at night
with the lost moons pounding their way out of the galaxy, scratching on
mental infinity and emptiness in search for reason.
Awards
Comments on "This Dali Symphony"
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On Thursday, August 9, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...Dali alone could paint this into surreality...
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On Wednesday, August 8, 2012, Dominic
(53) wrote:
This is absolutely incredible. I am in awe.
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A former member wrote:
"that same mouth in the morning which tastes of stale tobacco and bad wine" I love your descriptive layering, the red raw wrecked molested flowing energy of this poem. The rhythm in the tenth verse is extremely effective. You have captured the Polaroid universe of the city's hard, hard underbelly quite well. This is Daliesque & symphonic. Well done!
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A former member wrote:
More than a mouthful, for sure, but fucking fabulous..bends about the bracket of the mind only to end up wherein stretches the unfathomable. Brilliant as ever.
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On Thursday, June 1, 2006, Mari
(419) wrote:
okay....so your not crazy...big deal
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A former member wrote:
very stunning, very awesome write `Tamara
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A former member wrote:
"craving for a little coffee and tonic, praying that they wouldn’t go home drunk with the smell of filtered cigarettes" this was both wise and beautiful..such aching truth, profound and marvelous. and such an amazing conclusion.
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On Sunday, May 21, 2006, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
youre absolutely incredible. a mindbend of such addictive desire for ...meaning washed down with desire in such chaining ways whiting out blackspells and .life. itself. in essence, humankind lost and pretntiously found. youre absolutely divine.
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On Sunday, May 21, 2006, Any
(39) wrote:
That's interesting, very, very interesting. Especially this first sentence.
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On Sunday, May 21, 2006, Wolk
(54) wrote:
I like this one.
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On Sunday, May 21, 2006, NeroMatches
(49) wrote:
Acropolis is a village where all the students of exclusive schools party by the way.