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- "Awesome, well put. I really like the repetition with the beast and the thousand. Images are lovely, and feel like they belong, its a nasty dirty place. ;) coolio."
Posted by Unknown on "concert" by doll on the rag
- "This is excellently written. Your words took me to that place and made me feel what you were feeling. Althought, these days I try to avoid the pit at all costs. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "concert" by doll on the rag
- "Failure?! This took me there; among the best descriptions of 'being there' that I've read. It's fantastic, and evoked everything of the beastbelly metalcrowds I've been in too. I loved it. So there. I give it a A+. >:D"
Posted by purr_verse on "concert" by doll on the rag
- "
*i have been in the belly
of the beast with a thousand* HELL YEAH. FUCKING METAL, BABY. *starts DP mosh*
"
Posted by Alanarchy on "concert" by doll on the rag
- "I guess this poem holds sentimental value to me because I'm such a concert rat. I really did enjoy this one. Write on."
Posted by Alanarchy on "concert" by doll on the rag
- "Crowd surfing and shit. They mostly just stand around and bob their heads* But this was sweet. I love going to gigs. Music is always so much better live. That's when you get the full experience."
Posted by Alanarchy on "concert" by doll on the rag
- ""shakespeare forewarned me
the ravaging possession
of "the beast with two backs" Sweet. Not a failure at all. This reminds me of every show I've ever seen *Except for those wailer's show's I'm always seeing. Everybody's too stoned to be Crowd surf"
Posted by Alanarchy on "concert" by doll on the rag
- "this poem is a failure from the start. a [poor] dedication to the experience on february second: children of bodom in concert."
Posted by doll on the rag on "concert" by doll on the rag
- "" I couldn't help but worry we'd be the last dissapointment in his life" ...
"Two young regular something buring out their throats in an attempt to scorch their heart and feel anything""
Posted by Unknown on "regular somethings." by doll on the rag
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