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- "wonderfull .. I realy like the whole .. damn it! feeling it has to it. Tho I would like to see a little re-typing and also you could some time try and write your rhymes in a-b-a-b form. :O) Anyways.. Keep up the poetry. atleast it helps you to gain self k"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "You killed me..." by smearedXmakeup