Broken Perfection
By smearedXmakeup
Feared acclamation of the soul,
Intense emotions beginning to unfold,
You're my lugh in the greatest pure,
You are seductive temptation: to me you lure.
There isn't a thing about you that i don't crave,
ou came into my crushed world as if you had come to save.
And you did, you changed me in ways i never could have dreamed of,
until you i never even believed in love.
you're the star, to which i've wished upon,
cried at all night until the dawn.
Dreaming of your touch, imagining your kiss,
as if talking to a god, unimaginable bliss.
i live every second for your voice,
loving you the way i do isn't a choice.
There aren't words to explain my love for you,
i dream always of being in your arms sometime soon.
romeo took juliet's breath as you take mine.
i can't think of any other, you're so perfect and so divine.
goosebumps arise as i imagine your body with me here,
can't help but smile dreaming of you near.
Do you promise to let my heart die with yours?
to be by my side always-nothing less and nothing more?
to relive all my pain, simply by whiping away a tear?
be my knight in shining armor, fight away my fears?
i promise to brighten your every day,
make everything disappear in my own special way.
i'll keep you warm, lying in your arms past dawn,
when you need a smile, i'll be here to turn upon.
when the whole world hates you, you'll be perfect in my eyes.
i'll always show you the real me, not this broken disquise.
my sun sets and rises in your smile...
don't give up on me love; your waits almost over, i'll be there in a while.
Comments on "Broken Perfection"
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A former member wrote:
This in itself is perfection!
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On Sunday, March 5, 2006, DeviantxSeraph
(17) wrote:
Wondeful!Absolutly love it!
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On Wednesday, June 1, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
There is a lot of emotion in this. And excellent write!
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On Wednesday, June 1, 2005, Labitina
(37) wrote:
wow, this was beautiful, a lot of feeling in this, I really love it ~Christina