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You killed me...
By smearedXmakeup
You're still walking around free,
as if you never harmed me.
but you have.
you killed me.
Slaughtered my passion and hope,
Strangled my heart without a rope,
Smothered my dreams in diar despair,
Choked my love; free of air.
I'm dead,
and you killed me.
But i'm still walking around the planet,
With memories of you and i can't stand it.
you should be locked away.
you're a murderer in so mny ways.
you've poisoned my tear drops, forever sad.
Stole all the laughter that i once had.
Buried who i was...
you killed me.
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Copyright 2005 smearedXmakeup
Published on Wednesday, June 1, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "You killed me..."
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On Thursday, October 20, 2005, Frater Synth
(66)
wrote:
awasome write i love it there is so much emotion being put right out there for us all to see. i look forward 2 reading more from you
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A former member wrote:
i can relate. this piece has so much emotion great job.
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On Wednesday, June 1, 2005, wandering druid
(79) wrote:
Another excellent piece..
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On Wednesday, June 1, 2005, Soulfire
(97) wrote:
Very powerful...love it!
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On Wednesday, June 1, 2005, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
knowladge
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On Wednesday, June 1, 2005, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
wonderfull .. I realy like the whole .. damn it! feeling it has to it. Tho I would like to see a little re-typing and also you could some time try and write your rhymes in a-b-a-b form. :O) Anyways.. Keep up the poetry. atleast it helps you to gain self k
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On Wednesday, June 1, 2005, PoeticMindBlow
(22) wrote:
Awesome. mmm. Job well done.
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