You killed me...

By smearedXmakeup

You're still walking around free,
as if you never harmed me.
but you have.
you killed me.
Slaughtered my passion and hope,
Strangled my heart without a rope,
Smothered my dreams in diar despair,
Choked my love; free of air.
I'm dead,
and you killed me.
But i'm still walking around the planet,
With memories of you and i can't stand it.
you should be locked away.
you're a murderer in so mny ways.
you've poisoned my tear drops, forever sad.
Stole all the laughter that i once had.
Buried who i was...
you killed me.

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Copyright 2005 smearedXmakeup
Published on Wednesday, June 1, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Frater Synth On Thursday, October 20, 2005, Frater Synth (66)By person wrote:

    awasome write i love it there is so much emotion being put right out there for us all to see. i look forward 2 reading more from you

  • A former member wrote: i can relate. this piece has so much emotion great job.

  • wandering druid On Wednesday, June 1, 2005, wandering druid (78)By person wrote:

    Another excellent piece..

  • Soulfire On Wednesday, June 1, 2005, Soulfire (96)By person wrote:

    Very powerful...love it!

  • Dancing_Monkey On Wednesday, June 1, 2005, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    knowladge

  • Dancing_Monkey On Wednesday, June 1, 2005, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    wonderfull .. I realy like the whole .. damn it! feeling it has to it. Tho I would like to see a little re-typing and also you could some time try and write your rhymes in a-b-a-b form. :O) Anyways.. Keep up the poetry. atleast it helps you to gain self k

  • PoeticMindBlow On Wednesday, June 1, 2005, PoeticMindBlow (22)By person wrote:

    Awesome. mmm. Job well done.

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