Comments by All Members
- "I am new to the Dark Poetry community, and I like it very much so far, and this write is a really great thing to do for your fellow poets... I like how you say "There’s laughter and joy
Pain and sorrow" You all share very sincerely here. I love how you express your appreciation for the way others help you through their own writings. I am very glad to be a part of what the dark poetry poets have here. Great job."
Posted by Enough on "DarkPoetry Poets, (just a few to name)" by Cherry Bear
- "Absolutely adored this to death. I found myself steering away slightly solely due to the lack of flow, but it did for me what poetry is composed to do...it forced me to feel and relate. I'm favoriting this one :)"
Posted by CjPsychotic on "Sun Flared Wisdom" by Cherry Bear
- "I like your explanation :) Like Lipstick said, work on the odd grammatical error. Also, if you're able to use examples to illustrate the brilliant points you've made, your teacher is going to fucking love you =) -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "To define a Poet " by Cherry Bear
- "Are you looking for content or grammatical suggestions? The content is very good--excellent description/concept of poetry but there are a few grammatical errors. Not sure what you're looking for in way of suggestions so thought I would ask. "
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "To define a Poet " by Cherry Bear
- "I think this is beautiful. I really do. I didn't tell you earlier. It's easy to find words for mediocre poetry, and that is why I spoke none the first time I heard this. I really do like it. Everything about it...it touched me. :::hugs::: Remember...don't touch you marshmellow to the wick!"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Once upon a time me and you where we{Part 3}" by Cherry Bear
- "Decided to comment on this, but I'm finding it hard. I get this weird sensation in my gut when I read it...not good...not bad and not even somewhere between. I don't know. I'll get back to ya. "
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Crawling off the spider's web" by Cherry Bear
- "Yup...yup...I shall make this my comment worthy poem for the night...because...well...because it is beautiful like warm rain. I like it all...as it flows so evenly and my tongue enjoyed the ride around the wonderfully placed rhyme. Was like saying that MarryPoppins thing....only better. And I agree with Rain...needs more comments. I mean...it's sad when good poetry gets hid in the shadows of an "in the box" reading habit. OH....and how special that Spider must feel to have such a poem dedicated to her!"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Puzzles Change" by Cherry Bear
- "lol,..my brother started pushn trolleys at safeway at age 13,...by 22 he was managing the place,..he had to be relocated due to death threats,...junkies dont appreciate being told there is no 'safeway' to shoot up,...perhaps your better off elsewhere,...welcome"
Posted by Unknown on "Working for Hell (Safeway untold)" by Cherry Bear
- "how is it that this has not been commented on yet?? !! people on here need to open there reading list to include more than just their faves -for faves sake'!! well I loved this, it was strong and had an easy flow in reading and in rhyme. and these lines.. I believe in and know well""Holding on to count the tears
take the pain and turn out strong
Just to find the one true love "" welcome to DP...:) ~Rain"
Posted by Unknown on "Puzzles Change" by Cherry Bear
