Comments by All Members
- "thats a really good poem..and a lot of good ?s..i thought like that once..ran away 2 my grandparents garage (JiNx knows which one im talkin bout) but i was found bout an hr later..:) but..dont run away, people care about you even though they may not show "
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "If I Died Tonight" by DarkSoul
- "i can relate..this is a really good poem..i wish i could write like you! -Kel (ps..whoever she is, shes a bitch for hurting you) sry..had 2 add that :P"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "Apothocary" by DarkSoul
- "I like this because it is something many of us have been through. Powerful. "
Posted by Unknown on "Scorn" by DarkSoul
- "Once again, you got me in the heart. I have felt this many times, and never knew (or wanted) to put it into words. Well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Deprived" by DarkSoul
- "Wow...that just struck a knife through my heart. Every loss I have endured in life just rekindled fresh to memory. Nicely written."
Posted by Unknown on "I" by DarkSoul
- "Nicely written. Alot of it comes down to "Listen." Most in these situations don't do it. Very nicely worded."
Posted by Unknown on "Listen" by DarkSoul
- "I hate having to deal with people who cheat.. This is a very good write, though. :) --beautiful"
Posted by Unknown on "Listen" by DarkSoul
- ""Against a tidal wave. Disintegrated by
Your life’s blood" -- Beautiful line. Sad and painful write, well written. Very good job.
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Posted by K_Love on "Listen" by DarkSoul
- "you must face alot of sorrows in yo life to write like this...very nice job..dripping with a saddnes i can not describe...so i will leave it to you"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Listen" by DarkSoul
- "it suonds to me like you miss someone alot but cling to the faint hope that they are in a better place"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Emily" by DarkSoul
- "very simple yet very sad and full o longing...i wishsomeone would miss me like that!"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Deprived" by DarkSoul
- "great write, great poet too! i love your work already, and you can feel the emotion, fantastic write -story"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "Deprived" by DarkSoul
