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"So eloquent.. I'm speechless. "
Posted by Unknown on "The White Horse" by VenomPlease

"Wow. That has an impact. "
Posted by drasticdaydreams on "I prayed to God for cocaine" by VenomPlease

"I always end up here. "
Posted by Cassette on "I prayed to God for cocaine" by VenomPlease

"This was surprisingly beautiful in that it's content was not what I was expecting. It was classy and elegant."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "I would burn for you" by VenomPlease

"You pictured this one so clearly for us all to see and feel the atmosphere...And that last stanza is knockout."
Posted by carlosjackal on "I prayed to God for cocaine" by VenomPlease

"this is really that old"
Posted by Unknown on "I prayed to God for cocaine" by VenomPlease

"Unique play of words! I loved it! :) thank you for sharing - and nice flow. "
Posted by Unknown on "Dead end dreams" by VenomPlease

"Re-reading this, seven years later... all i said was "excellent write." What ignorance I displayed then. I may not be praying for cocaine, but this resonates within me, almost reaching the crumbling effect of that perfect harmonic. I hope all is well."
Posted by MESUN on "I prayed to God for cocaine" by VenomPlease

"Magnifique!"
Posted by Chaos God on "I would burn for you" by VenomPlease

"I really like this and totally relate. I hope it works out better for you than me, but bang on for the poem. Best Regards, -Lost"
Posted by Unknown on "I would burn for you" by VenomPlease

"This is well deserving of Poem of the Day. It's lovely and displays how far we will go for love."
Posted by Dreaming in Stanzas on "I would burn for you" by VenomPlease

"Wow. This is an intense and powerful piece. A beautiful flow. I loved it."
Posted by Unknown on "I prayed to God for cocaine" by VenomPlease

"One time, I tried to paint the images that you conjure in my mind with this piece, only to be utterly disappointed that they cannot mirror the truth here, or the pain and desperation... that little girl hiding from angry voices in the most obvious of places... she steals away my heart, you steal away my heart and breath with this......"
Posted by Unknown on "I prayed to God for cocaine" by VenomPlease

"Haha this made me laugh. Nice job."
Posted by Unknown on "White Christmas" by VenomPlease

"I like how the crucifix turned to gold... sometimes shit makes too much sense to be worth a good goddamn... powerful truth."
Posted by Unknown on "I prayed to God for cocaine" by VenomPlease

"intense....A great piece of writing"
Posted by Unknown on "I prayed to God for cocaine" by VenomPlease

"Wow. Hit me like a brick on the head. Amazing."
Posted by Bluegirl on "I prayed to God for cocaine" by VenomPlease

"Love it this was so awesome:)"
Posted by italianbella on "The White Horse" by VenomPlease

"Def can relate line after line after line great write hon:)"
Posted by italianbella on "Snow White" by VenomPlease

"nice."
Posted by Mari on "White Christmas" by VenomPlease

"being grown up is never what we thought it would be.. this is wonderful"
Posted by Reefer_rave on "I prayed to God for cocaine" by VenomPlease

"well versed, well said... well done?"
Posted by Unknown on "Dead end dreams" by VenomPlease

"this was fun to read, those Stones aint the same no more...NL"
Posted by NapoleonsLust on "Dead end dreams" by VenomPlease

"i think that my penis almost exploded once its scary really scary-NL"
Posted by NapoleonsLust on "I hope your dick explodes" by VenomPlease

"this is.. impressive. nicely done.♥"
Posted by Unknown on "I prayed to God for cocaine" by VenomPlease

"I still come back and read this every so often. And there's still days I pray to God for some coke, but I know that if I ever started using again I'd be dead in less than a week."
Posted by Unknown on "I prayed to God for cocaine" by VenomPlease

"Fantastic write, the build up to the conclusion and conclusion itself brilliant....:)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "The White Horse" by VenomPlease

""Listening to their angry words echo Off the walls of that broken home" Captivating; a story well understood. The twist even while knocking on Heaven's door (to use a cliché). Well done (I know these streets, these paths). Amen."
Posted by Unknown on "I prayed to God for cocaine" by VenomPlease

"This was so great. Im speechless."
Posted by Unknown on "I prayed to God for cocaine" by VenomPlease

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