Comments by All Members
- "If I leave here tomorrow will still remember me, I must traveling on now, too many places I've got to see. Sorry couldn't resist, the tile took me back to the anthem of the 70's. Great song. Great job on the piece too. "
Posted by Damien on "free bird" by Devil-lyn
- "The wordplay was fuckin perfect, it belied the depth and intensity of the moment. It reminds me of this weird kind of narrative mind I find I have when it's all falling apart, I call mine "the narrator". Anyways, this is, with absolutely no hyperbole one of the top few things I've ever read here. You are in rarified air my friend, thank you for sharing your talent with us."
Posted by Adagios on "free bird" by Devil-lyn
- "i enjoyed the imagery in this one very much. "so tonight
as the luggage
drags across a terminals floor
I will stand out, ill sheltered" - i could picture that scene quite clearly! well done! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "free bird" by Devil-lyn
- "I guess there would be less good songs and poetry if it wasn't for heartbreak. infidelity is tough, because then you start to question yourself. I think the person in this poem did the right thing and just flew, because sometimes all we can do is move forward from our decisions. thank you."
Posted by Patches on "free bird" by Devil-lyn
- "this is very deep, I feel the coldness of your winter. I also felt anger, abandonment .if i'm off base please forgive me. this seems very personal. your a brilliant writer, glad to see you back sis. cheers ...mo"
Posted by molock on "north pole" by Devil-lyn
- "oh this was good...damned delta good...bed crumbs of diamonds and promises...is it forgiveness in the end or release? regardless...impressive!"
Posted by Unknown on "free bird" by Devil-lyn
- "well I for one was filled with the spirit of the holidaze after reading this...this poem was a narrow oddity much like your feet...but you should realize it doesn't make since to fly south looking for the north pole...Xie Xie Welcome Back!"
Posted by Unknown on "north pole" by Devil-lyn
- "I love a good piece of scathing honesty, especially when it's crafted by a brilliant poet like yourself. Excellent work. "
Posted by Queazenart on "apokaluptÅ" by Devil-lyn
- "The leadup of this was great, but the last three stanzas blew me away in their intensity and emotion. Bitterness and anger are the two emotions I pick up, with an underlying bit of acceptance and enjoyment (perhaps due to the destruction??) at the end."
Posted by Lady Grinning Soul on "apokaluptÅ" by Devil-lyn
- "I don't know. I sense a lot of love here, D. They say that you can't truly obsess over someone until you attempt to destroy them first. What's a little betrayal in exchange for a lot of dishonesty? Tell me, is the "for you" put there to keep it outside, or because it doesn't belong there? You can be so obtuse at times, but in a good way. Still, this poem made me feel something. Thank god you didn't write it back in 2012, or I would have just felt crazy. =("
Posted by Unknown on "apokaluptÅ" by Devil-lyn
- "I have been keeping up with your work. You blend a lot of 60's and 70's references with your unique, brutally honest style. The Little girl from Night of the living dead. Crystal Blue persuasion from Tommy James. I really like your style, it's an old school slap in the face with just a touch of madness. "
Posted by Damien on "apokaluptÅ" by Devil-lyn
- "as an avid coffee drinker, I find myself brushing my teeth later and later...but somehow I think the central theme of this poem has a bigger story to tell...Xie Xie"
Posted by Unknown on "apokaluptÅ" by Devil-lyn
