Comments by All Members
- "I really enjoyed this. It had an infectious rhythm. You managed to tell a story from beginning to end. Nicely done. "
Posted by Drea on "Wrong Turn" by Just Dave
- "You capture the isolation incredibly well. This is a great write, and you deftly draw attention to the darker issues of the soul. That is a truly fearless thing to do."
Posted by Unknown on "The Monster Inside" by Just Dave
- "Thank you Willow for all your kind comments. You very quickly became a staple here at DP. "
Posted by Just Dave on "Wrong Turn" by Just Dave
- "I was reading over some of my favorite works that I have bookmarks and the poets and realized that you were missing from my list of favorite poets. You are one of the fist I had listed. This poem is still there but not you. So I'm putting you had on lol. I don't know how it erased you. Made me rather upset. Just wanted to let you know.💚"
Posted by Willow Wept on "Wrong Turn" by Just Dave
- "We always do something we come to regret, but I liked how you penned this. Kind of feel that dread of her ever getting out lol... nice job!"
Posted by Gypsyeighty3 on "Wrong Turn" by Just Dave
- "This was awesome, they say the scariest individuals are the seemingly weak, quiet ones and it's true. We don't know the horrors that lurks in the minds of these individuals but every now and then, they share a glimpse of it with an unfortunate soul. Great write, keep up the spectacular work(:
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Posted by Gray Vision on "The Monster Inside" by Just Dave
- "Wow! This is just...idk. I don't really even have the right words in a good way. I hope that it isn't based on your own personal truth. If so I'm sorry. I have been there. I know that pain."
Posted by Willow Wept on "The Monster Inside" by Just Dave
- "Interesting structure and piece! This effectively spun a story filed with anger and regret and guilt. Well done! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Wrong Turn" by Just Dave
- "I love the last few lines of this piece. "She will not survive mine," stole my thoughts for a moment. The execution of this piece is stunning. Great work, please continue to write and share with us! "
Posted by Unknown on "Wrong Turn" by Just Dave
- "Your opening is an attention grabber, and I can appreciate the overwhelmingly regretful tone. Your piece has a nice rhyme scheme and drives deep when you transitioned through raw emotion. And I have to say, I'm actually disappointed in the protagonist, "where's my damn donuts!?" ... .
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.......don't mind me, infidelity makes me uncomfortable, but aside from that, a mighty fine and structured design. --TG"
Posted by soul_versing on "Wrong Turn" by Just Dave
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