Comments by All Members
- "there are worse things to be in love with... Nice! ~worm~"
Posted by worm on "Midnight" by Tagen
- ""Her fingers they trace down the scarlet lines, into her soul where the brutal thorns lie" That was incredible. Terrific rhyming as well. Great write."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Her Thorns " by Tagen
- "May the permafrost keep you well Smokes. We frequently forget we live on easy street. Cheers my friend! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Tundra" by Tagen
- "This almost felt like a song. Flowed very well, I enjoyed this. Well written."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Tundra" by Tagen
- "Your welcome. It would be nice to see more thoughts on this ..."
Posted by Devil lyn on "Tundra" by Tagen
- "Feels like a lycanthropy ode amidst iced moats. Haunting, yet delicate. "
Posted by Devil lyn on "Tundra" by Tagen
- "This was something ancient and mysteriously ominous without sounding...well, vainglorious! Nicely done Smokes. Sometimes fried grasshoppers are all there is to eat. I always got a laugh out of them spitting tobacco juice on your fingers. Gotta look-up "ptosis" now since my medical terminology escapes me. Cheers my friend! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Locust Breath - Vainglory" by Tagen
- "A terrific and touching tribute Tagen. I think older people have the most to say before they lose their voice, or are silenced. Written well; with a knowing hand - cheers! - Dan "
Posted by dwells on "Savant" by Tagen
- "Personal writes always hit me the hardest. "I am broken, too broken for her" that line really resonates. Well written tagen."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Savant" by Tagen
- "The flow is quite beautiful and there are many quotable phrases within, however I must admit that I don't know enough of the lore to fully appreciate this, but it is a lilting piece nonetheless. "
Posted by Amaryllis on "Locust Breath - Vainglory" by Tagen
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