Comments by All Members
- "nice flow, and catchy rhymes..not the kind that lull you to sleep...i reread this as it touched stirred some recent memories."
Posted by natalie on "The Lament" by Tagen
- "Yes, this is haunting. I think Edgar would be proud. I would be if I were him. "
Posted by Star on "The Lament" by Tagen
- "Oh my god this sings like a sacred whispering prayer. I always read your poems in a whisper. This is just too beautifully lilting and even hypnotic. But not trance like. More like transcendent. . . ."
Posted by Cantara on "The Lament" by Tagen
- "The haunting tone left my heart yearning. Great piece with strong imagery. -Perfection"
Posted by soul_versing on "The Lament" by Tagen
- ""Is December's beauty, caught in the air." I love how you catch emotion in this poem. Nice!
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Posted by Unknown on "December's Pain" by Tagen
- "" ... Sting of bees, nectar vows.
Lucid highs and blows ..." the pace and mismatched rhythm and rhyme refects and mimics the wondering derailed thought pattern. This is very different in its phonetics to your others I've read. It definitely stands apart. It's interesting Tagen."
Posted by Lilith Black on "December's Pain" by Tagen
