Comments by All Members
- "Fear in my face accusing me... I couldn't have described this sense any better. Well done. I know this state very well too. You gave it words I've not been able to."
Posted by Cantara on "Suffocato" by Dismalmind
- "I've also been contemplating the moon lately. How uncanny. The moon as a psychologist is so darn true. I've been thinking that because she reflects the sun's light; she is a mirror in a way and when we are connected to her it's an energy of reflection on all levels, including introspection. Therapy. Yes. this is some great . Well done."
Posted by Cantara on "Drop of delusion" by Dismalmind
- "And a wonderful dream it is. They are the worst to wake up from aren't the ... lovely journey through your dreaming"
Posted by Cantara on "Dismal" by Dismalmind
- "Refreshing writing. Much enjoyed. Your line arrangement was something different and Interesting too."
Posted by Cantara on "Blank Page" by Dismalmind
- "Good write - it is very simple but lends itself to an immense amount of hope! I enjoyed it very much."
Posted by BloodyMercy on "Blank Page" by Dismalmind
- "This is really a beautiful, romantic piece. A kind of love that a lot of people long for but don't always find. Cherish it. Awesome ink."
Posted by Unknown on "Dismal" by Dismalmind
- ""I was speechless
When inhaled her breath" - great opening line, which builds on the theme of being filled and changed in the process. Great piece! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Dismal" by Dismalmind
- "Oh no ... I can't comment on this. It would be cold and heartless. My love to you With a Hug ♡"
Posted by Cantara on "Outflow" by Dismalmind
- "Brilliant piece. I love the subject. This fits in among the mass with many faces. I enjoyed the word play. "
Posted by Unknown on "Layers" by Dismalmind
- "I'm glad to have found you. Thank you for your comment. I've read them all ... you have an interesting style. The first two ended with hammer like words. I loved the few words chosen. They were well chosen and said a lot. They certainly deliver an impact. I also love the honesty of free verse. Sometimes talking sounds better than singing ... (great bio) I will be back And looking forward to it."
Posted by Cantara on "Layers" by Dismalmind
- "I love this. Not too many people can move me through words anymore but you did. Welcome to dp."
Posted by Unknown on "Opprobrium" by Dismalmind