Comments by All Members
- "After I read your work I always end up longing to hear it sung. Just an acoustic guitar and a lone voice... I end up reading your work a few times before I comment for that reason alone. No matter how much sorrow I felt from this, it has that silver lining. The visuals alone make this worth it. Reading this just felt good. "
Posted by Drea on "Nimrods baby" by molock
- "In all honesty, I love the "Babylonian Angel" stanzas. It just conjures up some interesting visuals in my mind's eye. Although I don't understand why you're saying "sorry". Never discount the beauty in your work, darlin'. Rebs:)."
Posted by Unknown on "Nimrods baby" by molock
- "you are fantastic Dan! your comment brought me to tears with laughter. sorry it took me so long to reply i don't know how this one got by me."
Posted by molock on "Babylon sister" by molock
- "I love that line “what would happen if you stopped comin round†sometimes the wishing well is all we have. Beautiful my friend."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Wishing Well" by molock
- "thanks as always dwells, i thought i lost this one forever as well as some others but i recently recovered an old account from another poetry site and they found me again. as always it's good to hear from you. later - m0"
Posted by molock on "Wishing Well" by molock
- "Sounds like birds of a feather; flocking together Mo. Like how you nicely reversed the roles here. Cheers my friend! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Wishing Well" by molock
- "This was sweet. I needed to read something like this tonight. Those last few lines made me smile. "
Posted by Drea on "Wishing Well" by molock
- "You can really feel that longing for someone else. Someone to mend your heart and take away the pain. Great my write my friend."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "will you" by molock
- "I can hear this power ballad. It's such a heartbreaking lyrical write. Love it. "
Posted by Drea on "will you" by molock
- "I believe it is, even though i have met my soulmate we've been together 20 yrs now i often write from the brokenhearted point of view. Im just a rock -n- roll lyric hack and 90% of all the rock songs i ever heard are about women in some way, shape or form. That's how i get these types of writes. Enough of my babling, it's always good to hear from you. Later dwells - m0"
Posted by molock on "will you" by molock
- "She's waiting somewhere; in some time brother; hoping your synchronicity surcharge is paid-in-full. She'll reveal when least expected. Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "will you" by molock
- "You make me want to pick up my guitar every time I read something from you Mo. Youre an artist with words."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Losin' you" by molock
- "Mo, reading this hurt. I found myself humming this as I read it. Well written. "
Posted by Drea on "Losin' you" by molock
- "i promise you Phalanx i've been there, i wrote this over 17 yrs ago from my own experience after my divorce. at that time i was doing every kind of drug you can think of trying to deal with the overwhelming depression i was having. my own kind of hell was in my mind and i couldn't escape it. i appreciate you reading and commenting. peace brother - m0"
Posted by molock on "Killin' the memories of you" by molock
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