Comments by All Members
- "Such a change of feeling half way through, I were swanning in your descriptions and then felt as though I were hanging on for dear life...love vs despair...enjoyed"
Posted by Unknown on "Encapsulated" by CorruptedLittleGirl
- "it's always the want.. to feel something anew, to bring new life. perhaps the spring is incorrect in it's blessings."
Posted by Unknown on "Ripening" by CorruptedLittleGirl
- "I was one of those kids that had a hard time letting go of my stuffed animals.. I was teen still playing with them... I had a whole world in my head. I miss that world. they are all in a box in the attic... I miss em. "
Posted by Unknown on "An Old Friend" by CorruptedLittleGirl
- "Awwww. I have a stuffed alf- remember alf?- that I'm keeping forever. Screw the grandkids, bitches, alf is mine. I don't know if this is the one you mentioned, but I enjoyed it nevertheless. As far as criticism goes.... I loved the underlying message here. Letting go. And the tone and phrasing were good. I can't really call you out on anything, you've thought of everything. So nice work, and write on."
Posted by Alanarchy on "An Old Friend" by CorruptedLittleGirl
- "I felt this piece..We owe it to our fluff-filled friends to cherish them as we did in childhood.They are the undefeated secret keepers :) the revisions were perfect."
Posted by Unknown on "An Old Friend" by CorruptedLittleGirl
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