Comments by All Members
- "An interesting undoing Saa, and the visuals you described were mind-blowing. We all return to the source, of something perhaps. Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "THE HORIZON" by saatyaki
- "Right off the bat, the first line is a brilliant line in a fine poem. Very enjoyable read."
Posted by Just Dave on "THE HORIZON" by saatyaki
- "it is fine, he has rights to his work (his son, i believe), he is clearly marking who wrote it, and it is clearly intended to enrich the experience here. a decision was made on this a while ago. he isn 't trying to make money, just share the work of his father if i remember correctly. it isnt the same thing as posting someone elses song lyrics or something like that. "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Jesus Christ- Great Visionary, epitome of humaneness" by saatyaki
- "I thought the rules were no promotional stuff. I mean its not a bad write though it is diff for a dark place. But anyways its cool an its true that he was one of the first great visionaries though a classless society was once tried and everyone went to war but it wqs under a tyrant. Meaning communism "
Posted by Allen on "Jesus Christ- Great Visionary, epitome of humaneness" by saatyaki
- "I love the vivid, beautiful imagery in this one. Definitely a thought provoking piece. I especially loved the imagery of the neem try actually seeing the author and laughing...that creates a fantastic mental image for me. I also love the simple, almost toying challenge at the end, "is metaphor an illusion?". Fantastic work, thank you for sharing this with us. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on " Ode to chaitra*" by saatyaki
- "We don't. That's the saddest part. Used to be a city of millions could band together, click refresh on their current government, and start anew. Now, a city of a million dissenters can be reduced to charred corpses in seconds with a simple phone call and the iron will of someone brainwashed enough to follow the order. I fear a million arms with a million guns no longer stands a chance in this day. But, I'm a bit of a pessimist, as they say. Cheers."
Posted by Aleas on " O! My Beloved Country!" by saatyaki