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  • "a quaint little meeting revealed in what recalls renaissance verse, looks like mostly tetrameter, maybe? Reminds me of the Lady of Shallot a bit, or something from Hawthorne, maybe... love the irony at the end... and what is this end reached with this 'he'... that it is but another beginning... a foreboding chuckle resonates over this open question the reader's left with. Thank you. "
    Posted by The Dybbuk on "The Reaper" by vicimineo
  • "this made me think of the dynamics between readers and writers ... fueling and nurturing in cycles ...stories laid down like growth rings and re-read and interpreted by others ...decrypting past lives...understanding the present and dreaming of futures... thanks :)"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "Poets Prose" by vicimineo
  • "Nice inking. :) it reminds me of a quote; I can't remember the exact or even the author... but it referenced that; 'the writer tricks the reader into listening to their dreams'. A little off topic, but I have always loved poems on the subject of poets, I have one myself.. called The poet's quill. thanks for reading.. "
    Posted by blue angel on "Poets Prose" by vicimineo
  • "A nice short piece here you get your message across very well is there a typo in this line Along a writers weary trials should it be trails? well done cheers"
    Posted by Unknown on "Poets Prose" by vicimineo
  • "the hope that's found in verse, in the prose that only a poet will rehearse... a chance one will unravel with words... a world worthy of hope, maybe. thank you, a well devised work capturing the sentiments of the reader while exposing the aim of the writer. "
    Posted by The Dybbuk on "Poets Prose" by vicimineo
  • "I love it when my head bobs and my food taps to the rhythm of words without music. Well played. "
    Posted by Geronimo on "Poets Prose" by vicimineo
  • "sometimes... it's the painful memories of futures changed... I think that may be a large part of what a relationship is... a common future, a whole life unlived waiting... those memories, once one rebuilds another future, they become that which none other can know... what makes you... you. maybe. there's always another future awaiting... be well. thanks."
    Posted by The Dybbuk on "Burning Memories" by vicimineo
  • "Great poem. Epic. Seems like it was written by a famous poet. "
    Posted by Mona on "Insanity" by vicimineo
  • "one lives many lives, if one is able to live one fully, one must face more than one precipice before coming to know the fall, perhaps then there's not such a drop, maybe then, having lived so many lives and peered so many times... then one never really notices one's landed... cheers to starting over. thanks for the words "
    Posted by The Dybbuk on "The Edge" by vicimineo
  • "that's a worthy message to hold on to , in theory... I should be getting pretty wise by now :P ... "
    Posted by kinkifrog on "Life's Gifts" by vicimineo
  • "that's some mighty harsh soul searching ... I think it's more like software though ... I like your dramatic gesture ... welcome to dp :)"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "Soulless " by vicimineo
  • "Its very good. I really like the repetition of the line. I was like i watching it in my head."
    Posted by Unknown on "Soulless " by vicimineo
  • "Nice. The dark repetition brings fierce imagery. Lyrically pleasing, thanks for sharing ~^_^~ "
    Posted by blue angel on "Soulless " by vicimineo
  • "Nice inking:) it's raw and full of emotion! Thanks for sharing! Oh and thanks for commenting on mine, and welcome to darkpoetry :)~"
    Posted by blue angel on "Insanity" by vicimineo
  • "Indeed, no need to write a lot of lines to describe how you feel. "Hearts that bleed" is a classical "dark" image but the Author breathes new life into it. Well written!!"
    Posted by Unknown on "bleeding hearts" by vicimineo
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