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Soulless
By vicimineo
I took my heart out last night
ripped it right out of my chest,
I took my heart out last night
to do what I do best.
I took my heart out last night
to examine every crack,
took my heart out last night
Now I cannot put it back.
I took my heart out last night
determined in my goal,
I took my heart out last night
to see if I had a soul.
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Copyright 2014 vicimineo
Published on Wednesday, July 2, 2014.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
Great piece! The imagery was great.. And I will take my heart out tonight too.. Who knows?.. :)
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A former member wrote:
Its very good. I really like the repetition of the line. I was like i watching it in my head.
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On Wednesday, July 2, 2014, vicimineo
(31)
wrote:
Thanks your comment creates nice imagery.
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On Wednesday, July 2, 2014, blue angel
(877) wrote:
Nice. The dark repetition brings fierce imagery. Lyrically pleasing, thanks for sharing ~^_^~
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On Wednesday, July 2, 2014, vicimineo
(31) wrote:
Thank you so much. It means a lot coming from someone who writes as well as you.
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