Soulless

By vicimineo

I took my heart out last night
ripped it right out of my chest,
I took my heart out last night
to do what I do best.

I took my heart out last night
to examine every crack,
took my heart out last night
Now I cannot put it back.

I took my heart out last night
determined in my goal,
I took my heart out last night
to see if I had a soul.

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Published on Wednesday, July 2, 2014. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Soulless "

A former member wrote: Great piece! The imagery was great.. And I will take my heart out tonight too.. Who knows?.. :)
A former member wrote: Its very good. I really like the repetition of the line. I was like i watching it in my head.
On Wednesday, July 2, 2014, vicimineo (31) wrote:

Thanks your comment creates nice imagery.
On Wednesday, July 2, 2014, blue angel (866) wrote:

Nice. The dark repetition brings fierce imagery. Lyrically pleasing, thanks for sharing ~^_^~
On Wednesday, July 2, 2014, vicimineo (31) wrote:

Thank you so much. It means a lot coming from someone who writes as well as you.