bleeding hearts

By vicimineo

Bleeding hearts and hearts that bleed,
tortured by life's evil greed.
Inside out and outside in,
running from the pain within.
Learning to live and living to learn
No answers found so questions burn.
 

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Copyright 2014 vicimineo
Published on Tuesday, July 1, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • vicimineo On Wednesday, July 2, 2014, vicimineo (32)By person wrote:

    Thanks for all your comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

  • blue angel On Wednesday, July 2, 2014, blue angel (906)By person wrote:

    I like the flow, it felt like a dance swaying from sentence to sentence Very cool ink :)

  • A former member wrote: Indeed, no need to write a lot of lines to describe how you feel. "Hearts that bleed" is a classical "dark" image but the Author breathes new life into it. Well written!!

  • A former member wrote: Awesome. Really like the flow.

  • A former member wrote: I like the rhyme scheme here...short but most certainly packs a sweet punch.

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