Comments by All Members
- ""Return to me my limbs
Feel this warm sand beneath my feet
Walk this earth one more time
The cool breeze on my face" - just wonderful imagery! I love the entirety of this piece and the sense of quiet comfort it sends me in terms of hope and openly expressed awe at life's wonder. Fantastic job! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Silent Wish" by Olufunke Kolapo
- "The personification of time being arrogant not only amused me momentarily, but also rang so true. Short and sweet, good read."
Posted by Unknown on "Till Death" by Olufunke Kolapo
- "Yes...time indeed can be a monster...the atrocious wall that keeps pushing us, in a slow, tormenting manner towards that deep, deep edge that is death...like a horror rollercoaster....well written, and a warm welcome to DarkPoetry, where time stands still"
Posted by Unknown on "Till Death" by Olufunke Kolapo
