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  • "Tears...Your words rise like the wind and strike like the hammer on the anvil, i crushed beneath...Your conversational tone and introspective feel is humbling indeed..."
    Posted by Solace on "living on used time" by apophenia
  • ""art is this morning bird singing" ...and art is your words; always so erudite and profoundly observant... this is wonderful."
    Posted by purr_verse on "the aftermath" by apophenia
  • "every time i read your wondrous words, i feel like i'm staring at the sun through six, or seven pair of assorted sunglasses. your so talented, and i’m perpetually humbled ~db~ "
    Posted by birdwell on "living on used time" by apophenia
  • "The feeling of frustration behind it, the desire for freedom, selfless freedom...It aches inside, tearing away, common negativity derides it and leaves it for dead..."
    Posted by Solace on "apophenia" by apophenia
  • "The urge to quote is almost maddening, but i shall refrain, for you already know this work and it would be useless to both of us to do so...Suffice to say that I understand both the rambling and the message..."
    Posted by Solace on "apophenia" by apophenia
  • ""and since i have been shown to be quite destroyable in every way, i could not face the children of my dreams, crying at me that they never should have been born""
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "apophenia" by apophenia
  • ""i do want connection, and i despise it all the same for that need, the blatant glare of denial, true independence is a child’s dream as well" and "
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "apophenia" by apophenia
  • "This is magnificent - I can relate to this very well at present...from the other side of the moat... My favourite two sections are "
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "apophenia" by apophenia
  • "this madness is... a celebration ... one learns to clap , then claps louder .. because one can , and because one should ... so how loud is loud enough? no such thing ... i found this very interesting to say the least ... all encompassed ... funguy"
    Posted by capt_funguy on "apophenia" by apophenia
  • "I think I've burst some brain cells trying to keep up with this one...your words just bombarded me with images and thoughts and philosophy...wow. One read does not do this justice...I'm off to read it again... Fox"
    Posted by flying_fox on "apophenia" by apophenia
  • "i feel as though i fell from a building, and split my head open, or swallowed a school bus. something extraordinary... "
    Posted by birdwell on "apophenia" by apophenia
  • "transparency is evidently meaningful ... you induct the whole to my parts, articulate this wander/wonder even in my forgetfulness ... thank you"
    Posted by apophenia on "reductionism/schism" by apophenia
  • "conscience, conscientia, consciousness, being so aware, yet so utterly... involved. a masterpiece of word, and thought ~db~ "
    Posted by birdwell on "reductionism/schism" by apophenia
  • "drown thrashing in the deep waters until my lungs are filled and I let myself give in to sink into the depths...so long as I could do so in your mind, my sweet wanderer. Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "reductionism/schism" by apophenia
  • "causing the quest to become nothing more than a continual retreat from intimacy. A system can truly never be fully aware of itself, in the end it must just be what it is... I would be willing to exit this quest right now, "
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "reductionism/schism" by apophenia
  • "To strike a balance between the logical and poetic is the quest of the ages...is the sun really the wheel of a fiery chariot running across the sky toward eternity, or is the earth just turning?"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "reductionism/schism" by apophenia
  • "The mother, the spider and the washer... wow... really, wow... so many concepts and so many lines that imprint for a good long while. Truly awesome. "just a child wanting to play with adult toys.." -SueZen"
    Posted by Mute Serenade on "apophenia" by apophenia
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