Comments by All Members
- "oooooh my... yes I love this, you have taught me soooo much in a very short period of time, we are linked here by these thoughts and the reflection of the last interrogative lines is explanatory"
Posted by Unknown on "i press..." by apophenia
- "god, i've read this 3 times now and it's consuming, every thought provoking line and question burrows its way deeper to that profound end. i could read this over and over and find different apices...between the longer sides of which links us "
Posted by ApathysKiss on "i press..." by apophenia
- "Fantastic as always - a journey through politics and philosophy in a family situation that reminded me of sunday family lunch...At times vague - at others abstract and mostly erudite at the point of an extremely intelligent mind. "
Posted by Solace on "ode to silence" by apophenia
- "fuelled by perturbed emotions of actuality; effectively used with the backdrop of economically-driven power variability...this was written very different, erratically acute, informing, but at the same time delivered with precise bluntness. -=ak=-"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "ode to silence" by apophenia
- "so many striking lines 'ritual disassociation/as if surface detail were all there was./and it is really .../what does it mean for philosophy to be personal?' "
Posted by ApathysKiss on "ode to silence" by apophenia
- "i don't even know where to begin with how this struck a cord to my awareness of modern corporate and lifestyle banalities,"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "ode to silence" by apophenia
- "I hear this so damn clearly!! How long I've been waiting to see this view from someone else, I can't say, too long most certainly. Wisdom for the ages this is. The moment, yes, the moment is where all things reside, most definitely the beauty of life. :) "
Posted by blue on "the aftermath" by apophenia
- "i loved the poem a lot, but i think i may have loved the reader's not even more. ;) "i believe when speaking of a vagina one need not jump to gender role conclusions" well stated. ....-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "the exploding vagina world" by apophenia
- "wow this was cool for some reason it reminded me of the manson movie that comes with one of those cd's ~~GAP~~"
Posted by Unknown on "Untitled" by apophenia
- "a stretch into the realm of hope and a breach of the fear that comes with the desire that hope enfolds... given to warmth... beautiful words much needed"
Posted by Jonas on "hope" by apophenia
- "Hope is a radiant light so like the sun - when we are used to looking away from it, it may burn our eyes at first when we again recognise its presence...but our eyes can again adjust as tears are released that remove the film the clouded our vision. "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "hope" by apophenia
- "'(extinct but evolving)
i giggle around this cynical dystopia'/ existentualistic intensity as revenge from pleasure for observation; unique& splendidly written like an unknown moonset in discoursed beauty..."
Posted by Unknown on "the exploding vagina world" by apophenia
- "Of all the poetry i have seen in dp, epigrammatics and yours are the ones that strike me the most, the ones i could lie inside for hours, like little miniature worlds in and of themselves..."
Posted by Solace on "living on used time" by apophenia
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