Comments by All Members
- "I love the tension in this- sort of a controlled surface- or mask with chaos underneath. The visual of the man with the rose is acute enough to feel it. Fantastic write!"
Posted by ShadowFlight on "keyholes" by boundandfallen
- "Nice job. After reading all your stuff, I only want more. I enjoyed this one just as much. Welcome to DP."
Posted by Alanarchy on "here i am" by boundandfallen
- "...Meh. But before I go off on a rant, I'll just say this. Great poem. Fantastic imagery and I loved your composition. This one Knocked me outa my seat. Like a kick in the soul. Great work."
Posted by Alanarchy on "raw beauty" by boundandfallen
- "A fictional tale, but this does happen. Quite often, actually. All thanks to those damn magazines telling everyone how they should look. According to whome? Society? "
Posted by Alanarchy on "raw beauty" by boundandfallen
- "So lush and sincere. The end was just... Graceful is the only word I can come up with. This has to be my fav from you so far. You have a certain way with words... I can't quite place it, but I'm lovin it so far."
Posted by Alanarchy on "a lonely girl" by boundandfallen
- "This was great. Stellar rhythem. I was really drawn in by the sheer rolling beat of the whole thing. And the content was excellent. Nice."
Posted by Alanarchy on "subterfuge" by boundandfallen
- "Yes. Definately could be a song. I think this would sound great with an acoustic guitar or even piano accompanyment. I loved the overall "feel" to this. Great work."
Posted by Alanarchy on "i walk into the night" by boundandfallen
- "lol yeah i got it, and liked, i have to say tho especially so from the 2nd stanza on, a terrific example of the subject brillaintly written"
Posted by Anth on "subterfuge" by boundandfallen
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