Comments by All Members
- "its good to see the last thing that you have written was a work of art reflecting positivity. I hope that has stayed with you. Never regret anything... because without those/these moments we wouldn't be who we are today- nice words Dark-"
Posted by MyBrokenMynd on "Living Life" by DarkNTormented
- "Wow! this is sad, but happens alot in life. I've been in a similar situation, and this poem really hits home with me."
Posted by Unknown on "I've Forgotten" by DarkNTormented
- ""If you get a chance, take it / If it changes your life, let it" - my heart sank a little when I read these lines...maybe it's just the mood I'm in but it really hit me. "
Posted by Unknown on "Living Life" by DarkNTormented
- "I know this all too well..... I loved this because it describes my past feelings all too well...... nice write"
Posted by Unknown on "NoMore" by DarkNTormented
- "Never would I wait or hope for someone to come back to me. But, in the past I have... maybe it's a learning experience we all have to go through, but if I could save some trouble... fuck them. You don't have to settle. ;) ~Heather"
Posted by peril_notion on "NoMore" by DarkNTormented
- ":( I know this scenario all too well. this is well written. I just hope my baby comes back to me again"
Posted by NumbInside on "NoMore" by DarkNTormented
- "i know you dont really get on here much no more.. and i see you everyday so this is pointless... but.. foreal, your a good friend superrobin.. and i love ya lots... *hugs and stuff*"
Posted by MyBrokenMynd on "to my best friend" by DarkNTormented
- "ok.. you read this to me on the phone and i started crying.. so im not rereading it again, cause i dont want to cry.. but damn superrobin.. wow.. hehe barbies and ninja turtles.. and dynamite and a big explosion in the back yard... hehehe.. *spiderbat*"
Posted by MyBrokenMynd on "My Toy Box..." by DarkNTormented
- "see..you are getting better with every write,in so many ways!!, awesome my friend,barbies and ninja turtles
what a mix
a few M&M's and just one twix ..lolness"
Posted by Anth on "My Toy Box..." by DarkNTormented
- "Its the thoughts of days gone past which we keep along with all those things in our "toy boxes". Its what made us who we are today.
Naaaah, I just wanted to sound like I know what I'm saying."
Posted by Unknown on "My Toy Box..." by DarkNTormented
- "I have often travelled this same path of thought, you put the concept into exceptional use of word and rhyme, structured well. "as time goes insane
there will always be memories that remain" was a particularly killer line i thought. well done."
Posted by Unknown on "My Toy Box..." by DarkNTormented
- "really great work again,the flow is faultless,the rhyming and repetition of the line excellent,keep it up, i always enjoy everyone one of your new writes,u always get better"
Posted by Anth on "the lock" by DarkNTormented
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