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  • "Precisely why you should lock your windows!!! haha. Sometimes I feel like when people get murdered it's half their fault. I mean, don't put yourself in a situation to be murdered, and you will probably be fine...Maybe I'm just paranoid. Another riveting write from you. Nice one :)"
    Posted by Intoxicating Delirium on "The Night Stalker" by Commander_Cadaver
  • "I stood in the shadows and watched your candle's flames, rise and fall for the wicked as you chanted in their names. They smiled wide their demon grins for their faithful follower allows them to enter in. Darkly it is written by your blood. :)~"
    Posted by blue angel on "Walpurgisnacht" by Commander_Cadaver
  • "Yeah, witches and Pagans celebrate it for different reasons though. Think it their beliefs have something to do with the spring. Can't remember. But glad you liked it and thanks for reading."
    Posted by Commander_Cadaver on "Walpurgisnacht" by Commander_Cadaver
  • "this conjures the cloak of darkness upon the devils and witches that practice this holiday. ritual is how its done, you did it well my friend. lol...I first learned of walpurg from anton lavey but then also came across many sects of witches that celebrate as well. I really love the pace you set in this poem, its a walk through right into this ritual. I could feel the evil radiate off your blade. nicely done cadaver! "
    Posted by haunted on "Walpurgisnacht" by Commander_Cadaver
  • "I actually really enjoyed this, though may I ask why is Lilith to the North? I thought femininity was to the East or South? I'm a bit rusty on my rituals, as well."
    Posted by Lux on "Walpurgisnacht" by Commander_Cadaver
  • "I am a serial killer fanatic and find them morbidly fascinating and know a lot of them and cant seem to remember why that name doesn't ring a bell. Richard Ramirez. I have work to do lol."
    Posted by sIo on "The Night Stalker" by Commander_Cadaver
  • "Did not see this comment here. And yep, Richard Ramirez was a Satanist, even drew a pentagram on his palm when he went to court, smiling as he held it up so they could take a picture of it. He was quite interesting. Glad you liked it."
    Posted by Commander_Cadaver on "The Night Stalker" by Commander_Cadaver
  • "I really like this piece! Being the slasher film fanatic that I am, it was really intriguing. Your attention to sensory details was spot on too and I could visualize everything! Hats off to you! If you've ever read Crime and Punishment Dostoevsky would be smiling at your sinister description :)"
    Posted by Unknown on "The Night Stalker" by Commander_Cadaver
  • "this is awesome! when I was growing up I remember my mom being terrified and anal about locking everything up. because mr. Ramirez was on the prowl. we lived a half hour from where most of his bad assness took place. great tribute cadaver!"
    Posted by haunted on "The Night Stalker" by Commander_Cadaver
  • "Yes, this was about Richard Ramirez. And all the reports I read from articles and books, I never once read that he ripped out the eyes of his victims, he did in fact use lipstick to draw the pentagram and write "Jack the Knife", and he passed away due to natural causes in June, I believe. "
    Posted by Commander_Cadaver on "The Night Stalker" by Commander_Cadaver
  • "Are we talking Richard Ramirez here? he´+s on deathrow right now, awaiting execution by gaschamber. He pulled their eyes out too (do your homework) and probably drew a pentagram in the victims blood...but what do I know. He also ate a melon and thought ACDC was antichrist demon child...fun times. It was an excellent poem, though..loved it. "
    Posted by Unknown on "The Night Stalker" by Commander_Cadaver
  • "Something tells me you'll fit right in. This was pretty violent, not sure if I enjoy it or not. The writing behind it was superb though. Welcome to DP. The masses will collect you."
    Posted by Lux on "The Night Stalker" by Commander_Cadaver
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