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- "...silhouettes" The perfect poetry here is "half in half out" in that " Tattered nightmare_" way; tatterdemallion waves of vivid imagery, volumes, color(s). Read this poem and be prepared for that "fatal gaze" that will graze your senses like wild Waits.."
Posted by Unknown on "Anablephobia and The Faded Stars Between Us" by Bella Butchery
- "...& mild Midler sleeping as perfect strangers. The [title] is a f*ing stunning poem in of itself. But I must look up, again, if I dare read, again. I'm afraid, but I will. This rocks, this rolls, this is a step off crooked tenaments over dark depths of.."
Posted by Unknown on "Anablephobia and The Faded Stars Between Us" by Bella Butchery
- "...jungle Jungian & Lovecraftian slips. "perfect symmetry" Yea, that's all I needed to say, really. So cover me in dirty sheets because I'm falling into the broken bottles of this poem's phobia. (what!?) Nevermind. It's as brilliant as a heart-attack!
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Posted by Unknown on "Anablephobia and The Faded Stars Between Us" by Bella Butchery
- ""...a dim one way street
We pretend" Love the internal rhyme (a fave free-fom style of mine). "We speak white out lies" Well, just shoot me in my Anablephobiac face! Feel like I'm falling when I'm looking up; all the buildings like bent words "Into grey "
Posted by Unknown on "Anablephobia and The Faded Stars Between Us" by Bella Butchery
- "Your fear of looking up can result in the following symptoms:
breathlessness, dizziness, excessive sweating, dry mouth, feeling sick, shaking, heart palpitations, inability to speak or think clearly, a fear of dying, becoming mad or losing control, a sen"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Anablephobia and The Faded Stars Between Us" by Bella Butchery
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