Coffee Filters The Silence, Poison-esc
By Bella Butchery
“I love when the wind bites your cheek
To a soft blush because it reminds
Me you can still feel and you actually
Pump blood”
I told you to save your words
And keep them huddled to poisoned memories
*For the first time spiked coffee
And cigarettes do nothing for me*
Push through the noise
Distracted
In the veil
We sing silently
And lying next to you
I want to hear it again
In a motionless content
Thats all we are…
And run from me…
Chasing in the street tonight
Finally pointing it at you
dont worry about it honey
You could never decide
And this forced smile
…Is starting to weather…
i can tell you have rehearsed
So sing out
Thats all we are…
run from me…
And thats all we are…
Just a faded sound…
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© 2007 just shoot me in the face
Published on Friday, January 5, 2007.
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On Thursday, January 25, 2007, Army Barbie
(316) wrote:
Holy shit...The coffee and cigarettes...made me look at the coffee beside me and feel for the cigarette resting on my ear. Thing is..I know they're gonna do something for me, ;) Lovely's all I can say.
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A former member wrote:
i've been reading your writing for a while now, i just don't comment..but i have to say, i love the way you evoke not only beautiful images but emotions, too. i could feel this. very painful and wonderful.
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A former member wrote:
Damn, So much hurt in this. Its deeply sad. I love the metaphorical use throughout this piece. You really showed your words. " Thats all we are...Just a faded sound..."
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A former member wrote:
I can relate so well my friend. ][ ][
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On Monday, January 15, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
i love how you compare love/emotions to sound...its so true sometimes people just become dull static neither here nor there...very sad ~kristy
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On Thursday, January 11, 2007, hate_doll
(263) wrote:
wow..I read this once, then I turned off my music, came back to it and read it out loud..then in my head again. hollowing, you have indeed set the tone vey artfully...wonderful
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On Tuesday, January 9, 2007, Arianna
(105) wrote:
wow... I occasionally miss the good stuff. This is soul shattering. I love it. I shall come back here more often. ~A
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On Tuesday, January 9, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(423) wrote:
Brings back days when I practiaclly lived at bus stops,...especially the coffee and cigarette bit. Seemed my life revolved around others living/dying similarly.Very interesing title.
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A former member wrote:
as i also loved the way you ended this piece. very well done. ~ red
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On Friday, January 5, 2007, soul dancer
(95) wrote:
The 1st stanza was my favorite. Great write!
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On Friday, January 5, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
I agree with Z...the ending is untouchable...beautiful.
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On Friday, January 5, 2007, Tonights Decision
(132) wrote:
devastatingly beautiful..