Comments by All Members
- "this is gorgeous "fall crumbles as it leaves"... it feels like my lungs are being compressed while reading it.. followed by such a brutal revelation.. your pain is deeply felt.. with the seasons.."
Posted by Unknown on ".Bleach.Seasons." by K_Love
- "oh damn you got me to cry, at work no less. everything you've written spells out what sam and i have been through. thank you for putting such beauty to life!"
Posted by Unknown on "Thrash. Ponder. Beat." by K_Love
- ""While you held me, you held a monster." man. you take the words that i can't say and lay them out for me to see. i know EXACTLY how this feels. i love you."
Posted by dying angel on "Thrash. Ponder. Beat." by K_Love
- "I am unable to come up with a worthy comment at this moment but I will return with something as incredible as this poem...promise."
Posted by Mylissa on "Thrash. Ponder. Beat." by K_Love
- "I too have felt the languish throbbing deeper still beneath, those most-forgotten catacombs us poets wish to sleep, and silence nil evinces through the constant battering, of thoughts and sharp regrets which never sease their hammering..."
Posted by LordBrosnian on "Thrash. Ponder. Beat." by K_Love
- "I've been left on my stomach on tiled floors, gasping for the pain to ebb, the fear to fade, and leave me whole again...this is beautiful...thank you, for saying what I couldn't. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Thrash. Ponder. Beat." by K_Love
- ""I used to push the spacebar more often, wishing it were me that was falling apart." I love you...and the way you flow your thoughts into words of gorgeous sunrays and heartstrokes. *sighs* Excellent. ~*Beth*~
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Posted by Unknown on "Sunflowered Marigolds." by K_Love
- "wow. you always want someone to see how things look from your side. you portrayed that so well here. and the sunflowers stood for memories..little details about yourself that, although people might find outdated, you still find beautiful"
Posted by dying angel on "Sunflowered Marigolds." by K_Love
- "i know i have told you how much your structure kicks major ass... i thought i would just say it again... gives a grandiose / epic-nicity / build up feel that i love, and no one i have read really accomplishes it... kudos."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Umbilical.veined.Vines." by K_Love
- "this was pretty creepy....the hidden, mysterious 'she' of the narrative is always a shadowy figure that controls the proceedings....I found this quite common amongst some female writers here....no complaints though, it either works or it doesn't and here "
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Umbilical.veined.Vines." by K_Love
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