Comments by All Members
- "Thanks miss Lydia for such a kind comment! Your words do not go unnoticed, I assure you. I am a very emotional creature, when my heart spews its pain onto a page you can believe it's real. Sometimes you have to look below the surface as well, I tend to hide things in the there... I am flattered, that you are impressed of my work. Again, thank you.................. ~ACE~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "My Heart Cries Out" by Peyton1
- "Acrostics, so far as i have seen, are particularly to pull off without coming across as cliche. You have pulled it off brilliantly however..and even managed a pretty flawless flow. I am impressed. Your content was lovely and intelligent. I very much enjoyed his."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "My Heart Cries Out" by Peyton1
- "You have always been able to read my poetry exactly as I meant it. It only took your breath because you were able to climb inside my heart and feel what I felt when I wrote it. Wow, I should really shutup now..... It's an uphill climb and I can't see the top, yet I climb, because somebody said there was one....................... ~ACE~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "My Heart Cries Out" by Peyton1
- "Thank you for taking the time to read my latest attempt at poetry, Meagan. I am pleased that you like it. Being a Virgo, I am quite an emotional individual. I think some people don't care for that so much. I connect with things differently than most. Anyway, thanks for your comment, I cherrish each one............... ~ACE~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "My Heart Cries Out" by Peyton1
- "Omg! I stopped breathing briefly, and found myself at a struggle for air. I love how your title bleeds into your poem, literally spelling out,, my heart cries out. Mike, you are special to me and please... I've said it quite often now, "take care of you." ...hugs so tight that he gasps for air... "
Posted by soul_versing on "My Heart Cries Out" by Peyton1
- "wow, that response to me, is poetry of the finest nature... I'm in awe... speechless .................................. and I hope you will be doubly blessed ;)~"
Posted by blue angel on "My Heart Cries Out" by Peyton1
- "You have such a talent for the art of language Kendra. Your complimentary phrases rise on a whisp of warm air and then float gently across a crystal clear pond before coming to rest quietly upon thier own reflection. Such a soft landing it is that they create not even so much as a ripple on the glassy surface.......... Thank you, oh angel of blue, may your shade of this color remain ever so beautiful........................ ~ACE~
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Posted by Peyton1 on "My Heart Cries Out" by Peyton1
- "Thank you for your comment, oh angel of the soulless dark. Love is indeed magic I think, and just as illusive to find. For illusion is not magic at all...Thanks for reading me, and I'm pleased that you enjoyed my work............... ~ACE~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "My Heart Cries Out" by Peyton1
- "A gift, two angels have commented upon my poem. Does this mean I am to be doubly blessed?.................."
Posted by Peyton1 on "My Heart Cries Out" by Peyton1
- "This is of a pure natured beauty and soulful emotions interwoven within the heart's pleas.... It is utterly gracious from a devoted Valentine... Creative and heartfelt to say the least... Nicely inked, hotrod... Ace :)~ "
Posted by blue angel on "My Heart Cries Out" by Peyton1
- "Why thank you very much miss Katherine, it sounds like you picked up on the painful words my pen continues to scribble between these lines. I am trying to run it out of painful ink, lol. Welcome to Dark Poetry! I haven't been active much lately, but trying to get back. I will be reading your works as well, thanks for reading and commenting...and every comment helps.... see ya.... ~ACE~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "A sweet Valentine" by Peyton1
- "Thanks bunches for commenting miss Kendra! You are right, the L wound is the worst one. And it's so hard to stitch the L closed.... it must be because of the 90 degree turn at the bottom, haha! Thanks again, later girl........... ~ACE~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "A sweet Valentine" by Peyton1
- "Thank you for reading my work and for the comment. And welcome to our dark little corner of the world! I welcome all comments, as does pretty much everyone else here. Comment often, and post poems for us to read, that's how we all get to know each other. Thanks again for reading. Don't be shy, see ya around....... *~ACE~* "
Posted by Peyton1 on "A sweet Valentine" by Peyton1
- "Well, thank you for such a nice comment, miss.... I still don't know your name. Yeah, it does suck being alone on heart-day. I think I may just consider despising all holidays equally and be done with it! LOL Thanks for reading me, see ya......... *~ACE~*"
Posted by Peyton1 on "A sweet Valentine" by Peyton1
- "Ah yes the loneliness of Valentines Day
and how you made yourself available to tht special someone In which you were the one receiving the card and candy. Nice write"
Posted by Unknown on "A sweet Valentine" by Peyton1
- "this was sweet, very strong feelings were.portrayed here. been alone on vday myself, never fun im sorry :( 10 for you !"
Posted by poe_lover28 on "A sweet Valentine" by Peyton1
- "Glad ya liked that ending I slammed out there! Thanks for the read and the comment, I appreciate it. Trying to get back into the swing of things, taking longer than I thought..... Thanks again, see ya................. *~ACE~*"
Posted by Peyton1 on "A sweet Valentine" by Peyton1
- "Mega awesome write. I love the last stanza and finishing line. Perfecto...it really brings it home. I can definitely relate. 10"
Posted by megaprime81 on "A sweet Valentine" by Peyton1
- "Hey, thanks for reading and welcome to DP as well. I like to lead the reader down a set path sometimes....... and then go off-roading a bit at the end. It keeps things interesting. It would be better if it was ALL just a dream sometimes, I think. lol I will have to make it to your page soon as well, thanks for commenting, Later.............. *~ACE~*"
Posted by Peyton1 on "A sweet Valentine" by Peyton1
- "Thank you much for your comment, I'm glad you found it to be enjoyable. I'm a little late but welcome to DP! I like your works as well, haven't commented much at all lately... been depressed for a while, it sucks! I think you are quite skilled, and I will comment soon. Thanks again for reading me...........*~ACE~*"
Posted by Peyton1 on "A sweet Valentine" by Peyton1
- "Stunning! I loved this piece! Had a set rhythmic flow throughout! And cleverly closed! I really enjoyed this, nice work! 10"
Posted by Unknown on "A sweet Valentine" by Peyton1
- "nice. sittin there talkin about butterflies in your stomach and shit... and it was all just a dream. great read"
Posted by Unknown on "A sweet Valentine" by Peyton1
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