Comments by All Members
- "This is very telling and a true story for far too many. You started with tight rhymes that fell loose in the middle and tightened back up towards the end. Not new to writing, even without consistent rhyming, this reads easy, horribly haunting theme, but well written. Welcome to the valley, Devilish told me to read you, I look forward to more of your work - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Baby Doll" by darkheartmagic
- "Oh i think i am in love. touch me please. ohhhh mommie. i have a mommie pit me and a few of my friends have thrown ours in.. i think i have one similar called momma will draw them a .. lol. a lil offensive. but everything i write is pretty much offensive. hello there and welcome to darkpoetry. roam around and read others as it will bring them back to you . if you eva need anything i'm a click away.. "
Posted by Devilish on "Baby Doll" by darkheartmagic
- "I can hear you and feel you so well here. The pain is so well conveyed. Excellent wordchoices and sadness piercing through..."
Posted by Unknown on "Baby Doll" by darkheartmagic
