Comments by All Members
- "A heart and soul served on a golden platter;) Love your depth here :)~ and welcome to dp ~^_^~"
Posted by blue angel on "Tantric." by the Id
- "...here is that magic that is so rare & missed so much when it at last evaporates. nice work..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Tantric." by the Id
- "Haha! Pow! No need for apologies my good man. I like how there's a lot of dangerous elements of thunder & lightning to express the rage, yet the work is sprinkled with words that bring to mind just how childish our angers can be, like 'hate whines...', & the title itself, of course. It usually comes down to wounded pride, doesn't it? Haha, a "don't make me hurt you, & it will be your fault if I do" kind of logic to the passions of rage. Good first post, id. Welcome aboard."
Posted by Unknown on "Tantrums." by the Id
- "ah... where hope goes to slowly decay into a muddled life of sharp retorts and mounting verbal baggage, maybe. How we can still miss the scent of those early days before hell became us. thanks for the comment and welcome to the valley."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Tantric." by the Id
- "dude intense, i fuckin love when somethings dark and seductive"
Posted by Unknown on "Tantric." by the Id
- "You sure know how to leave your mark. this was intense... and the ending really packed a punch. awesome stuff. xoxo"
Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "Tantrums." by the Id
- "This was beautifully tragic.
and all too familiar. Welcome to DP, this was lovely can't wait for more. xoxo"
Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "Tantric." by the Id
- "way to make an entrance. welcome! you really fucking set the scene. entrancing. thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Tantrums." by the Id
- "Corpus deliciosus, get it while it's still warm maybe. Great rant and wonderful use of Mother Nature's metaphors in the opening. We are all children of hers, and she can be a mean mother, cheers and welcome to DP!"
Posted by dwells on "Tantrums." by the Id
- "Damn, "..before tasting your corpse.." Awesome ending, unapologetic indeed. Great first post, it made me hungry... Welcome to DP, hope you find everything well; if ya need help with anything, just drop me a line. Again, great post, look forward to seeing more of your sickness!
-NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Tantrums." by the Id
