Comments by All Members
- "i really like this entry, not only because it has strong ideas, but because i often feel this way too... actually, i feel that way most of the time. i really like that you managed to capture an emotion in your writing in the way that you did. excellent."
Posted by Unknown on "My Sinister Endeavor" by Dekika
- "its so heartbreaking when that happens and you have no one to blame but yourself. good write"
Posted by Cinn on "Is It Cheating?" by Dekika
- "I know the feelings... all too well. Great write. You really described everything well. Great job. ~Kirsten~"
Posted by K_Love on "Cutting" by Dekika
- "love this! "don't say anything just do it-
damn it!" written all over it* 669 *"
Posted by sixsixnine on "Sarcasm" by Dekika
- "this is the best of your works that i've read so far. the parallel construction works Very well. nicely done. lot of spirit in few words"
Posted by Unknown on "Eraser Dust" by Dekika
- "What a fantastic example of a child speaking with adult voice- it is also a painful example. Do me a favor: let that little girl know *YOU* love her... and she's not wrong to miss her Daddy."
Posted by ShadowFlight on "I Cry Daddy" by Dekika
- "The serious behind the fun... the bitter behind the sweet. This is both powerfully moving and silly... the last line from my view might be either: "you are making me cry" or "you are making me hungry""
Posted by ShadowFlight on "Preserverance" by Dekika
- "_oh,man...this was just plain creepy...and dark...and i don't just throw that word around.very unsettling...thank you.:)tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "Nightmares" by Dekika
- "_i can't believe that this has so few comments...*shakes head*...this was like the downward spiral of hopelessness.a condition i am very familiar with.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "Eraser Dust" by Dekika
- "i really liked this,the comapirsons you made were really strong, clever and brilliantly written, superb"
Posted by Anth on "Eraser Dust" by Dekika
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