Loathesome Heart

By Dekika

Loathesome heart
flee from me
hurt them not
they do not see

loathesome logic
reconsider
they do not notice
don't be bitter

loathesome actions
no, please stop
that's a human being
not a stage prop

loathesome endeavors
to cause much pain
to burden all others
with your lonesome bane

lonesome heart
keeps you reeling
makes you loathe
flee from feeling

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Copyright 2004 Dekika
Published on Wednesday, June 2, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Graveyard_Desciple On Thursday, June 3, 2004, Graveyard_Desciple (39)By person wrote:

    great write. the same feelings as i and many have. great job!

  • Alacer_Cogitatus On Wednesday, June 2, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (140)By person wrote:

    loathing is particullarly great. I love this! A_C

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