Comments by All Members
- "oouuh..! I almost got sucked in. I actually just took a conscious deep breath of life. Very strong emotion here; not really a place I'd like to feel, since I know where all that darkness leads. For a moment, reading this actually scared me. Thanx for sharing."
Posted by Void Vortex on "Do You Feel Anything?" by Dekika
- "I really enjoyed the embrace of hate at first! Very brutal and badass. It was also realistic how you went further and showed the inevitable degradation of anger with time"
Posted by Unknown on "Embers of Life" by Dekika
- "This is incredible!!! The power, and the truth this shows....I could imagine that being me....and from one little innocent question. It shows that a few little words can have immense power. "
Posted by Unknown on "Do You Feel Anything?" by Dekika
- "This is really good! alot of people feel like this and some even go and do these things. but int he end you'll just be miserable and everyone you love you'll have to earn thier trust back."
Posted by Unknown on "Do You Feel Anything?" by Dekika
- "if people only got the real answers when they asked such inane questions of other people. The truth hurts, the first and last lines tie everything together"
Posted by Reefer_rave on "Do You Feel Anything?" by Dekika
- "cut cut cut. Like it fixes anything. It's neverending pain that solves nothing whatsoever. I know this- trust me. ...What bewilders me are you in need of so much attention you're cutting for others now? "
Posted by Err0r on "Cutting" by Dekika
- "This seems like an old style betrothed with post-modern pessimism...it creates something slightly jarring, but by no means no less interesting and freshly hewn from suffering"
Posted by Solace on "No Longer" by Dekika
- "Great write... wow, no comments here? what a shame. Proud to be the first one. ~*~Tart~*~"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "No Longer" by Dekika
- "Wow, this was genious, this was well written indeed! She smiles but inside..through her eyes theres something wrong."
Posted by Elise on "Sadness Reflected" by Dekika
- "This is definitely something I've felt on more than one occasion. The last stanza of this wrapped this up nicely. ~Ship!"
Posted by Unknown on "Nightmares" by Dekika
- "Sadness reflected... it's interesting to think of photographs as a delayed mirror... a historical reflection of yourself..."
Posted by stormtalk on "Sadness Reflected" by Dekika
- "Oh I love this....I can't remember a time where I didn't want to be a vampire and you just made it that much more intense....great work!"
Posted by SilencedAngel on "Vampire Kiss" by Dekika
- "_fuck yeah...i keep hitting the jackpot tonite...i'm with you all the way here...i don't consider this to be sick in the least...that might mean that i'm sick too.;)tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "Vampire Kiss" by Dekika
- "great title / ending ... kinda have to jump onto this , like a moving carousel ... interesting snapshot of sadness .... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Sadness Reflected" by Dekika
- "This makes me think of all the stupid shit I've done in my life, but all that makes me laugh now. Back then I thought I was a badass and now I see that it was just fun. Great write, brought back memories."
Posted by Rebirth on "Being Bad" by Dekika
- "but later on. when love strikes.. you ae shure to regreat all the stupid childish shit.. especialy all the lying to keep a straight face.. *dances the I hate the past dance * good write tho"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Being Bad" by Dekika
- "Way to sum it all up! "Going against all you've been taught, because, at the moment, you think you should" Pretty much how it goes. nice piece. ~Ashley"
Posted by Unknown on "Being Bad" by Dekika
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