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Sadness Reflected
By Dekika
She appears so happy
in the photograph.
Smiling,
standing so straight and proud.
But her eyes,
her eyes tell another story.
Her eyes,
sunken back,
darkened,
pained,
tell the truth.
Suddenly her demeanor
seems to morph,
into that reflecting her true emotion.
She doesn't appear so happy,
now,
in the photograph.
But she smiles on,
that dark, deciving smile.
And no one looks close enough,
to see,
sadness reflected.
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Copyright 2004 Dekika
Published on Tuesday, June 15, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Sadness Reflected"
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A former member wrote:
I love this. its beautifully written.
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On Tuesday, March 15, 2005, Elise
(187)
wrote:
Wow, this was genious, this was well written indeed! She smiles but inside..through her eyes theres something wrong.
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On Thursday, July 29, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
Sadness reflected... it's interesting to think of photographs as a delayed mirror... a historical reflection of yourself...
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On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
great title / ending ... kinda have to jump onto this , like a moving carousel ... interesting snapshot of sadness .... funguy
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On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus
(140) wrote:
wow. A_C
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