Comments by All Members
- "That image of him staring at you while you sleep is really creepy... Curious structure of your work as well, kept me wondering. And hey, those are a lot of tags. He he."
Posted by Nimue44 on "Strange Shades" by Kristoff
- "I also wish we could use other fonts. And I also understand the numb feeling of waiting."
Posted by Nimue44 on "Vibrations" by Kristoff
- "i like the purity of this...at least that's how it made me feel, maybe because i'm listening to some old Ella tunes while reading this...made me sigh and sigh...love your style Kris. :)"
Posted by DarkBlueClearWater on "Perhaps Later, Ms. Oasis" by Kristoff
- "Good one Kris, and you can't blame so many girls for being reluctant when it comes to accepting a heartfelt compliment. Too many others have proceeded you no doubt with less than platonic intentions OR perhaps just low self-esteem. Don't give up; you'll catch her in a weak moment eventually. Well-said and now go sit in the shade before you get heat stroke! :) "
Posted by dwells on "Perhaps Later, Ms. Oasis" by Kristoff
- "Stand alone in a place of misery, is a place where I may rest my weary head and remember sweet memories. A beautiful sentiment, great write."
Posted by Unknown on "Perhaps Later, Ms. Oasis" by Kristoff
- "Yes, it was quite a while ago it seems. I wasn't in the rightest of minds when I wrote it, so to speak. I was mostly focusing on the concept, and didn't take time on the actual technique. Perhaps a re-write is in order?"
Posted by Kristoff on "A Chat With A Demon" by Kristoff
- "Haah!! This was wonderful. totally swirled me into every line. fantastic ending, supported by good flow in stanzas. Well done poet."
Posted by Unknown on "I Know The Monsters" by Kristoff
- "Unlike some of your other works, in this one --unless I am missing something-- metaphors, and thoughts seem to be lacking coherence, and meaning a bit, but it is full of interesting ideas, and very enjoyable."
Posted by Sorrowful Jester on "A Chat With A Demon" by Kristoff
- "Pain makes life more real, when feeling down its natural to want everything to be completely different, its very difficult to get out of such a rut. Quite the sad write, portrayed very well."
Posted by Unknown on "Besides Blood and Tears" by Kristoff
- "This is a great piece. I love how the person in this predicament has this hope that tomorrow things will change for the better. Great pen."
Posted by andhaka on "Today is the Day" by Kristoff
- "Haha so ok, writing a serious comment (if being serious is my forte- haha) I love the description for each well-known monster, the rhyme and your overall style. Really quite fantastic, you had me hitting 10/10 ratings for you after I read the very last line- which is also one of my favorites out of this piece. Thanks for sharing, such a fun read :)~ keep it up"
Posted by Symbol on "I Know The Monsters" by Kristoff
- "Some neat rhyming going on here and I like how this piece unfurls in a story-like manner and at least with a bit of peace at the end~ nicely wrought, very much enjoyed and I shall be sure to check out some more of your works :)~ Cheers!"
Posted by Symbol on "Today is the Day" by Kristoff
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