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"Like the void, she'll suck you in and leave you a barren, empty soul...Brilliant warning poetry and top shiz."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Trench." by Mute Serenade

"This is a great sequel to the original..That hole in the soul where a cigarette-smoking lover used to reside.."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Pillow Smoke II (I forget)" by Mute Serenade

"Yep..Kirk's nailed it again...So subtle....I drank this up, every last drop...Fantastic like a post-orgasmic Bowie lyric."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Pillow Smoke." by Mute Serenade

"Take it to the bridge! This was cray cray fun to read and I'm sure Tim loved it."
Posted by carlosjackal on "A SONG!, A Song?" by Mute Serenade

"Like an albatross climbing a hickory tree,,sorry,,that word brought a country song too mind,,""creepin""...great word play here,,"
Posted by Jerry stiles on "A SONG!, A Song?" by Mute Serenade

""I" not "This"...Dang!"
Posted by carlosjackal on "FloodMaster of Greasy Lake" by Mute Serenade

"This shall be back to bookmark this."
Posted by carlosjackal on "FloodMaster of Greasy Lake" by Mute Serenade

"Haha...Only just seen Kirk's comment below! He was indeed humbled and, yes, he is the fucking FloodMaster who put the damn in "damn straight" then sent it spiralling to oblivion! Totes amazeballs tribute spiral stream of consciousness."
Posted by carlosjackal on "FloodMaster of Greasy Lake" by Mute Serenade

"Aaarrrrrgghhhhh! I need to upgrade next payday....This was one capt of a dazzler of a piece and I had great fun reading it. This was the perfect dedication to Kirk and I bet he both loved and felt humbled by such a magnificent tribute :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "FloodMaster of Greasy Lake" by Mute Serenade

"Kirk nails it about the rhyme patterns.....Loved this one. Great description and brilliant use of that repeating last line for each stanza. Take a bow, this was boomtown fireworks."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Laugh or Die" by Mute Serenade

"Words fail me. This is just so, so good. This is totes brah."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Paste" by Mute Serenade

"Ooh, yes, that last line blew the whole thing up......Brilliant, passionate work.."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Ephedrine" by Mute Serenade

"Wow...thought provoking and wonderfully put together with just enough left for the reader to fill in that it will speak to their own interpretations very well. For me, this seemed like a religious piece, but I think there are many many things you have left this open to be to someone. Love it! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Plaster Casts." by Mute Serenade

"Lol Rebs... I just came out of a 10 year marriage started at 20 yrs old... I know what you mean! :)"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "The Whatevership" by Mute Serenade

"The health nut in me just keeled over in a sugar overdose :). I hope that this does end up in the book, as this brought a smile to my face. Great as usual, lovely lady. Rebs:)."
Posted by Unknown on "A Love Like Diabetes (2 versions)" by Mute Serenade

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