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  • "very deep and forward. this piece i find is very misleading but it does come together. i like how you used to some/to others. the comparison was a nice touch. i enjoyed hwo though prevoking this was. nice work"
    Posted by _Andrew_ on "Plaster Casts." by Mute Serenade
  • "you're capturing a dragged relationship so well , step by step , work by work ... freakin' me out ... funguy"
    Posted by capt_funguy on "Paste" by Mute Serenade
  • "i was the dead part of a " we " once ... this was beautifully conveyed ... and you can watch the hour hand creep ... cool ... funguy"
    Posted by capt_funguy on "I do believe..." by Mute Serenade
  • "Anyone who references Cohen has, at least, good taste. But this poem shows that you have talent as well. Hope you hang around. I really liked this. "
    Posted by Stranger on "Ephedrine" by Mute Serenade
  • "very impressive; original and pointedly engrossing...and "inner sapphires" is a most excellent phrase. :) purr"
    Posted by purr_verse on "Ephedrine" by Mute Serenade
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