Comments by All Members
- "There is heavy meaning behind your words. A lot up for interpretation, but I feel as if everyone can get their own story out of it. :) Well put. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Mask Behind Face " by Manperson96
- "welcome to dp. not a bad first post. u speak familiar words with a different voice...good job..
we are born to die...some horrific, some in peace, but i believe in karma and what we reap is definitely what we sow. thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "A Philosopher Once Said" by Manperson96
- "It always helps to know someone is there. And I agree that writing really helps...but it doesn't always cut it(excuse the horrible pun)the urges always lie beneath the mask of happiness. "
Posted by Manperson96 on "These Small, Red Lines." by Manperson96
- "I use to cut, and I would do it because the people in my life made me feel so shitty.. Then I found better people to be around and let go of the rest, fuck em'. I also found my one true love.. poetry.. keep writing and letting it out that way. Anytime you feel the need to cut, just write about it. Thanks for sharing and if you need someone to talk to inbox me. "
Posted by Unknown on "These Small, Red Lines." by Manperson96
- "I can really relate to this, keep your head up though.. I know it's hard but there is so much to live for. Thanks for sharing. 10/10"
Posted by Unknown on "My Final Days" by Manperson96
- "skyrim is awesome. this poem brought a smile to my face. I like "for my blood they came, but in their own they drowned" and of course the memorable quote from the game right there in the last 2 lines. I think I may attempt to write of this magical realm one day. "
Posted by Patches on "Dovahkiin" by Manperson96
- "Many good questions here. I think most of us can appreciate the glaring condemnation we've brought upon ourselves and how the end may play out. You philosophise yourself, sir. A tale worth telling."
Posted by Unknown on "A Philosopher Once Said" by Manperson96
- "Yay! Maybe it isn't your best, but who cares! I am Dovahkiin Warunna Stormsong, an Elder Scrolls Lifer. If you hadn't put that last line in there i'd have wished you had! "
Posted by Unknown on "Dovahkiin" by Manperson96
- "Reminds me of myself...a lot...scary almost how much.. anyway good write you put a lot of feeling into this and that's what makes it so powerful thank you for writing this."
Posted by Unknown on "These Small, Red Lines." by Manperson96
- "leaves one speechless
sounds similar to a work i had in my journal before it burned in the fire"
Posted by matteus on "I am Death" by Manperson96
- "Very true and beautifully written. Death personified without the image of The Reaper is always interesting. Thank you for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "I am Death" by Manperson96
- "I really, really like this one. The contrasting dark and light descriptions of death show it as a beautiful, yet ugly thing."
Posted by Unknown on "I am Death" by Manperson96
- "We all have something we do or use or abuse to feel better or feel nothing .. no matter how short lived the healing. i am a horrid drinker.. one shot two shot three shot oh so many more and more.. the first step to recovery .. lol. admittance. admit it .. you did. the other 11 are a lie. take each second as it comes. every day is a new day.. let it be a pretty day even if the atmosphere is ugly and the people in it are even more ugly. never let anyone make you feel worse than you make yourself feel .. you love you. fuck the rest. hugs.."
Posted by Devilish on "These Small, Red Lines." by Manperson96
