Comments by All Members
- ".."i tried to cry last night, but couldnt; the airport makes me numb." ..that line in particular held me. This words appear to me almost shyly-spoken.. almost.. yet forceful and clinging at the same time. Well done."
Posted by Unknown on "why is it" by manunkind
- "hmmm i really loved the flow of this, the pondering end...whole thing feels like a song you'd strum in a guitar somewhere in the corner, i don't know i just had that feeling...subtlely and powerfully reflective with a hovering anguish."
Posted by ApathysKiss on "why is it" by manunkind
- "a feather's sorrow brushes among your words, strokes of brilliant loss...hey, where ya headed?"
Posted by Unknown on "why is it" by manunkind
- "Never do you cease to amaze me with your delicate words so poignantly phrased...a tightly projected piece that augments its theme with brilliant eloquence and forethought..."
Posted by Solace on "Thirteen Views of the Cigarette" by manunkind
- "The devil is in the details, indeed. *smiles* This was rather delicious... your attention to the accent was quite refreshing, and lent an authentic feel to the work. Well done."
Posted by Raven on "A Snake In the Night" by manunkind
- "I keep coming back to read this, and meaning to comment, ... but finding myself at a complete loss each time. Your snapshots are beautiful and precise... winding around each other, until the last one leaves me gasping for breath."
Posted by Raven on "Thirteen Views of the Cigarette" by manunkind
- "the celestial metaphors are so intelligently developed, with care and graceful expression, there is subtle sexuality moving this write, an undercurrent carrying the heavens along"
Posted by Unknown on "The Seven Deadly Sins" by manunkind
- "So sad. Its a look into the future I see for some. It's sad because its fate fot those unfortunate who know no better...Very good. Imagery is great. -Salem"
Posted by Unknown on "claire" by manunkind
- "‘Thoughts like Quiet feathers’ silken and absolutely mesmerising since that line…
‘A crescendo in Pattering symphony’ delicately danced before my eyes reading this,"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Thank You Gene Pool" by manunkind
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