Comments by All Members
- "Perfect, darling. "i do not starve
dear caring friends the stars! the moon! for steadily i dine upon air
and upon the cool nights". It flows so wonderfully . . beautifully expressed."
Posted by Unknown on "internally skeletal" by manunkind
- ""A tear falls from her fading eye" beautiful. Sections of this poem remind me of the Vermeer painting 'Girl W/ A Pearl Earring'(as, of course, does your homepage pic)."
Posted by Unknown on "The Necklace" by manunkind
- "An amazing piece, gulped down with a sad smile. The way you express yourself is magnificent, each word leads me to add another measure of respect for you..."
Posted by Solace on "internally skeletal" by manunkind
- "How is it that this piece has so few comments? The poem is adorable; the imagery is simply sublime, as is the sunlit idea and the soft expressions you have used - 'The wild flower women are sipping tea As the sun so softly blows and shines'. Enigmatic -"
Posted by Unknown on "The Wild Flower Women (a triolet)" by manunkind
- "You describe your vision with impecable scrutiny. Those very details illustrate such vivid colors and images that each line is evoked from pure imagination. So very well done!"
Posted by steuss on "grand scale ablution" by manunkind
- "Where oh where have thou been hiding? Such candid sites, such glorious expression...Bring forth more and i shall gorge on your words like sweet candies..."
Posted by Solace on "the windy sea" by manunkind
- "The reversal of the status quo, of the ordinary every day, what would it be like to see it differently? I think you know..."
Posted by Solace on "grand scale ablution" by manunkind
- "This is the most amazing self posessed piece, i am truly in admiration at such talent, you have evoked such subtle metaphores and soft velvet words juxtaposed against hard truths"
Posted by Solace on "grand scale ablution" by manunkind
- "beautiful - very well crafted. I loved how much image you were able to capture in every line. But now I don't think I'll go out swimming any time soon :) lol"
Posted by Unknown on "the windy sea" by manunkind
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