Comments by All Members
- "Very creative use of "scene"...though "cyn" might not rise to the level of homonym, it's a close slant rhyme; I can't believe you crammed so much content into such a restrictive structure, really an awesome work!!!"
Posted by Unknown on "A Sort-Of Sestina (In The Library)" by manunkind
- "But Soft! what beauty through yonder soliloquy breaks! 'Tis the natural light of Shakespeare made more beautiful and rare by the soft, thoughtful voix de femme. Nice work!"
Posted by Unknown on "Soliloquy" by manunkind
- "Epic. I really like it. I'm surprised it took me so long to stumble upon this, but I'm glad I did."
Posted by Thorn on "we, the artists" by manunkind
- "ok, you just entirely blew mine away.. damn you. ;) excellent excellent write! ~b"
Posted by blue on "Soliloquy" by manunkind
- "what a great poem! the wordings and ultimate message within this is far above the banal scribblings so often found here. my compliments to you! ~b"
Posted by blue on "The Most Fearful Ordeal" by manunkind
- "This gives me tingles. goosebumbs, etc. I LOVE the repeated Poise... line, along with the whole thing. There is almost a longing serenity in this. Well done!"
Posted by steuss on "The Samurai (a villanelle)" by manunkind
- "this was smooth shared nostalgia , moment sit to remember what you are ... you're from everywhere everything .. and you summed it up beautifully .... funguy "
Posted by capt_funguy on "I Am From" by manunkind
- "what more can i say to you? honestly. your poetry is amazing. my own words are meaningless in comparison. you may hate cali, but the poetry youre writing in cali is amazing....."
Posted by Unknown on "A Petal For Your Thoughts" by manunkind
- "ali... i fucking love this, this is amazing. coincidence you lebelled it number twelve? i think not! haha. but seriously, this is incredible. im favoritizing it. youre an amazing writer."
Posted by Unknown on "Thirteen Views of the Cigarette" by manunkind
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