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"Thank you very much :)"
Posted by Deathkitten on "~Breath-less~" by Deathkitten

"As long as you felt something, I am doing my part. Thank you so much :)"
Posted by Deathkitten on "~Breath-less~" by Deathkitten

"Isn't such a bad thing haha thanks :)"
Posted by Deathkitten on "~Breath-less~" by Deathkitten

"Not my favourite activity but I do enjoy taking a good breath lol... Awesome pen lil kitty"
Posted by MissAngelic on "~Breath-less~" by Deathkitten

"This is incredible and masterfully thought out. Amazing work!"
Posted by Unknown on "~Breath-less~" by Deathkitten

"wow...just wow. You never fail to amaze with you beautiful and unique trail of thoughts, and the way you so easily put those thoughts to words. I felt like I couldn't breathe in the last couple lines. Simply perfect. Can't wait till your next piece Kitten! : ) xoxo"
Posted by andhaka on "~Breath-less~" by Deathkitten

"This is really brilliant, but now I'm very aware and conscious of my own breathing -.-"
Posted by Unknown on "~Breath-less~" by Deathkitten

"Aww thank you so much, Darkly :)"
Posted by Deathkitten on "~Breath-less~" by Deathkitten

"D, you always have a way with making the reader feel in awe of your pen. I love the way you make me feel. :)"
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "~Breath-less~" by Deathkitten

"this is very well written and I imagine a little awkward to write about a man that more or less abandoned you from his life. but he went through the trouble to see you but only in a court room just to prove hes not the father. I think your better off without him. and I wouldn't apologize for not thinking of him jess! its sad to think of your father not wanting to be a father and its gotta be hurtful when he doesn't want the responsibility of being a father to you. i'll take a moment of silence because im hurting for you. awesome jess!"
Posted by haunted on "Your Father's Day Gift" by Deathkitten

"I never knew my biological father either. I can't say that I have any resentment toward him, just curiosity. With me, the deadbeat legacy is definitely broken."
Posted by Unknown on "Your Father's Day Gift" by Deathkitten

"Dreadfully horrid ;( And having to remember on this day every year... :( I too know the horror from others. love u girl , ~^_^~"
Posted by blue angel on "Your Father's Day Gift" by Deathkitten

"Some (people) are born useless. I wonder that about myself often. Thanks"
Posted by Deathkitten on "Your Father's Day Gift" by Deathkitten

"Some dads are just born useless... He has to live with this and I hope it leaves a nasty taste in his mouth.. Nicely written my dear"
Posted by MissAngelic on "Your Father's Day Gift" by Deathkitten

"This is a sad write but this is great, beautiful "
Posted by Unknown on "Your Father's Day Gift" by Deathkitten

"Guilt is a bitch & so is karma. Thanks :)"
Posted by Deathkitten on "Your Father's Day Gift" by Deathkitten

" This was so honest and raw (as always expected from you) I hope that one day he'll realize what an amazing person he missed out on knowing. xoxo"
Posted by andhaka on "Your Father's Day Gift" by Deathkitten

"Yeah...maybe. Thanks, Dan :)"
Posted by Deathkitten on "Your Father's Day Gift" by Deathkitten

"A work of resonance to all mindless sperm donors, hopefully. This was masterful, thanks!"
Posted by dwells on "Your Father's Day Gift" by Deathkitten

"Hehe people will always deign to judge others the way they see fit, but its the way we judge ourselves that holds the greatest sway in how we live. Brilliant write, much enjoyed."
Posted by Unknown on "No solution" by Deathkitten

"Tear out the negativity, never let it get you down, the agony can't really ever be removed I think, only ignored. A fantastic write DK, one of my favorites."
Posted by Unknown on "Rip it out" by Deathkitten

""but you left me to die inside my mothers eyes" wow just wow. that does mean so much"
Posted by Unknown on "Your Father's Day Gift" by Deathkitten

"Loved the last two rhymes, felt like a lot of built up anger was there, and you were nice enough to offer a warning to! "
Posted by Unknown on "Words" by Deathkitten

"Aha! I love it, short and to the point, packs a powerful blow."
Posted by Unknown on "Interrogation" by Deathkitten

"A strong will shines through this poem, and a stubbornness to never give in."
Posted by Unknown on "Little girl" by Deathkitten

"Don't be. Thank you, lover."
Posted by Deathkitten on "Your Father's Day Gift" by Deathkitten

"This is so sad.. I am so sorry ..nicely written though dear. My respect is yours"
Posted by poe_lover28 on "Your Father's Day Gift" by Deathkitten

"Evil, or just corrupt I wonder? We do what me must to survive. Quite a pretty write, black whispers and red smiles."
Posted by Unknown on "Souless" by Deathkitten

"Yeah I tried to reconnect but it was nothing but awkward. Didn't go that great here either."
Posted by Deathkitten on "Your Father's Day Gift" by Deathkitten

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