Comments by All Members
- ""And only those/Without dark wores/Will from darkness trangsgress into a rose." I love the ending...and the rhyme scheme, coupled with the gorgeous way the imagery fell from your words like tears...beautifully done. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Of Roses and Lilies" by bloody LOVEly
- "My best mate's Teddy turned against him as a child. He woke up in the middle of the night to face his teddy and half-asleep heard teddy speak the unspeakable. "Bananas." "
Posted by carlosjackal on "teddy to the trash" by bloody LOVEly
- ""summer skies shed warm light upon my back, so i layed under the trees for shade" you have never ceased to put an image in my head -Oz-"
Posted by -Oz- on "do or die" by bloody LOVEly
- "You come to a point where you wonder if you've seen too much to make it back, to find your way to the man you were. Guard your eyes and your heart my friend. I suppose regardless of your efforts there will be pain, never lose hope."
Posted by Unknown on "do or die" by bloody LOVEly
- "Hope is a rare comodity in these difficult times and life is full of crossroads. Your poem reminds me of what it was like to be hopeful and strong, you must be young. They say it's not the age, but the mileage, where you've been, what you've seen."
Posted by Unknown on "do or die" by bloody LOVEly
- "Uplifting write - coming from indecision to decisiveness - such an inspirational poem that i want to go and shout "Wales forever" off the nearest mountain. I feel so patriotic after this - thank you."
Posted by Crimson Shade on "do or die" by bloody LOVEly
- """beware beware, your life is on the line" ".....definatly my favorite part..-Ozkins"
Posted by -Oz- on "Tapped" by bloody LOVEly
- "Oh dear...AHHH said it perfectly, this is VERY creepy, and a definate attention-getter. I will cringe each time the phone rings from here out. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "Tapped" by bloody LOVEly
- "nothing comes between me and my Teddy.......he's been sleeping in my clutches every night since i was 1yr old.......i guess some things never change;)"
Posted by elisa on "teddy to the trash" by bloody LOVEly
- "I'd hide them under my blanket and hold them tight when it stormed. Now Alyssa, my daughter, treats them the way I used to. thank you for this write, it brought back memories."
Posted by Elise on "teddy to the trash" by bloody LOVEly
- "I think teddy will still be there hoping that she still had time to talk. I used to treat my stuffed animals as though they were real, but they needed me."
Posted by Elise on "teddy to the trash" by bloody LOVEly
