Comments by All Members
- "there's a deep melancholy in your voice that whispers longing unquenchable. your diction is delightful but not overstated. your words reached into me and found a home, i trust they will keep me warm in winters grasp, thankyou."
Posted by Unknown on "Pre-Winter Discontent" by purr_verse
- "What muse whispered into your ears the inspiration for this marvelous/delicious suffusion of beautiful melancholia...So tangible and ephemeral...Brilliant!"
Posted by Solace on "Pre-Winter Discontent" by purr_verse
- "...and the final word: 'fall', a perfect & well-thought placement as mirrors the prelude to winter's anguish, yearning, disquiet. Like a softly felled leaf...morphs into a solitary snowflake...fades..."
Posted by Unknown on "Pre-Winter Discontent" by purr_verse
- "...'frayed vanities'. "ah, but autumn
Does not suit me; I merely fall." A perfect coda to tie in the opening line; has the absolute feel of a classic poem inventively accomplished, portrayed, & structured. Very well done: Bravo!"
Posted by Unknown on "Pre-Winter Discontent" by purr_verse
- ""And I fear the oncoming cold" Brilliant! An ephemeral stretch of time's descent you have enchanted here in the nature of autumn's persona. (Echoes of Persephone's myth). Lucent visual beauty.
"Here in the mirror, my fading..." the reflection of our 'fra"
Posted by Unknown on "Pre-Winter Discontent" by purr_verse
- "This is a great piece. I simply love the sound of the language. I actually find myself sounding out the words so eloquently put. Plus the extra little pun in the end was a slam dunk. Great write! -Gideon"
Posted by Gideon Lost on "Pre-Winter Discontent" by purr_verse
- "This is moving. It reads as if fresh from the hand of someone very angry with their own vulnerable state. "And I've taken your drug but I'm still coming down" I love it.."
Posted by Last1inLine on "Narcosis" by purr_verse
- "i love this...sweet and lovely..."fireflies bring erratic flametouch to darkness /and my anticipation rivals their burning"..you are a goddess...-l-"
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "crush" by purr_verse
- "i know all the logic , i know all the realities , but it's a sin all the same ... ensuring for always that there will never be enough beauty in this world ... loved this ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "her name was cinders" by purr_verse
- "the machine , the devouring machine .. to just think of the joy he would have had , and been .. the scampering , the clawing , the mad half hours ... millions upon millions of unpurred tremmors -"
Posted by capt_funguy on "her name was cinders" by purr_verse
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