Comments by All Members
- "This assembles the soul of sex into a few short words, as only poetry could... the first line was perfect; sucked me in like an industrial vacuum cleaner, and the progression from the raunchy hair comment to the beautiful ending was masterful."
Posted by stormtalk on "After-Dinner Mint" by MercyRain
- "the feeling this creates, in the way its written i s so utterly beautiful, just the way you put it, poetry incarnate, another amazing work from you"
Posted by Anth on "After-Dinner Mint" by MercyRain
- "--stinging/piercing/mad/caressing/soft/rough... just perfect mixture of schizophrenic emotions, WONDERFUL piece... beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.."
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Insipid Madness" by MercyRain
- "I wish that I could gather enough thought for once to create something as vivid/beautiful/spiralling as this. I LOVED the stanza that began with "The painter has met the paintress and croons to her". . . this was just. . damn, Beautiful.. stinging/piercin"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Insipid Madness" by MercyRain
- "Damn, This was absolutely stunning. amazing, a work of art. when I get upgraded this will be on my favorites, my heart, I must say this is the first piece to do this to me in quite awhile. utterly perfect. . . so many lines that scream flawlessness to me."
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Insipid Madness" by MercyRain
- "I am flabberghasted, completely blown away by this sensual, under the magnifying glass scope, you range across philosophical borders/artistic ranges and spatter them all with blood...The religious, the experience, the wholeness...this reeks of godliness"
Posted by Solace on "Insipid Madness" by MercyRain
- "Blah give me gray hair and wrinkles any day, I can't wait to be really old because then you can say all kinds of stuff and no one minds cause they think you have finally lost it, HAHAHA....O"
Posted by Ophelia on "old skool farts" by MercyRain
- "It's a bit of both. Unfortunalty I often mix growing up and growing... old, and I start panicking. I am sure of one thing though: This deserve to be in my favs! ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "old skool farts" by MercyRain
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