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- "The title is the perfect compliment to this piece of art. the words haunt me... strange how to same a poem can take them in different directions"
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "jig-zag" by eidos
- "Enjoying one's imperfections and understanding that those are the things to be cherished most is lost on many. I love quirks and scars are beautiful in my mind, whether physical or emotional - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "jig-zag" by eidos
- "loving can be so hard, and yet it is the only thing to do. thanks."
Posted by Unknown on "epiphany" by eidos
- "Perfect, although short but intersting...to the point. Keep writing. "
Posted by Unknown on "epiphany" by eidos
- "Spot on, poetry at its simplest and finest. The only recommendation I'd can make is maybe to format in Center alignment, might make it look like a spiral or funnel (or not!) Thanks for sharing - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "epiphany" by eidos
- "This poem hits so close to the heart that it stings to read it but nevertheless it is, as always, a perfect 10."
Posted by Dreaming in Stanzas on "jig-zag" by eidos
- "I love (and hate) that I understand this. I've slowly begun to think of times like these as "the (in)ability to smile at the good times." In reflection, though, were they good? Wonderfully expressed in so few words."
Posted by thyyic on "the understanding of time travel" by eidos
- "I like how the 'you' is the one who learns as the 'I' stands idly by between the pieces.... sometimes it is only by inaction that others learn from us, maybe. The circularity is intense... by trying to fit them together, one breaks them apart, almost a Taoist type of serenity in this lesson, and yet, filled with despair, maybe, something other than Tao, which tends to the optimistic vision. well wrought work, thank you."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "jig-zag" by eidos
- "haha... ignoring the problem.... is that like turning out the lights in bed? I liked the way I first thought it was a fear of being in love... then I thought, she's the problem, not the fear... :) and the significance turned nicely, thanks."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "out of sight." by eidos
- "that is sweet.... and is it not the case that we only know of death through the loss of the other.... Derrida writes extensively on this, it's thematic in his work. The existential moment, the moment of authenticity, of facing one's mortality and coming to take responsibility for our own time, in Kierkegaard and Heidegger comes when we transfer this finding to ourselves. Thanks, so many ways to say 'i love' thanks"
Posted by The Dybbuk on "the problem with immortality" by eidos
- "astute observation, the kind we only see in retrospect and reflection. supple thought stated plainly. good write. thanks."
Posted by Unknown on "jig-zag" by eidos
- "the opening reminded me of Zaphod Beeblebrox's Joo Janta glasses , that turned black at the first hint of danger to prevent one from seeing anything that might alarm them :P ... but seriously , interesting thought...I thought it was just to concentrate more fully on the sensation without going cross-eyed..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "out of sight." by eidos
- "True. Genuine love makes us tensed. Our respect for the loved person makes us think before doing any loving act as we deeply love our dear person. This is absolutely true I strongly declare. Thanks. mvvvenkataraman"
Posted by mvvenkataraman on "out of sight." by eidos
- "s.aged words... is this a bit of zen, or Taoism... this notion that hate, that malice, wounds the hater and malicious more than the object of his/her hate? I've often wondered, seems as if one could be happily malicious... that one could feel good while hating; I mean, it seems logically possible, maybe? Nice food for thought, thanks."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "foaming at the mouth." by eidos
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