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- "Awe.. How beautiful.. Hello there and welcome to darkpoetry.. roam around and read others as it will bring them back to you as well.. if you eva need anything i'm a click away.."
Posted by Devilish on "Kiss" by DavidVale
- "I agree with Sin that there's a longing, a deep passionate care and affection written in these words. It gives this piece a soul. It breathes. Breathes passion, ecstasy, want and pleasure. This was definitely a pleasure to read. Welcome to DarkPoetry. We're glad to have you:)"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Kiss" by DavidVale
- "This was nice. The longing came through...seemed a little tentative. To me rhyme in these kinds of poems always seems a bit forced, free verse gives you more range to fully express. nicely done non the less. welcome to dp ~k"
Posted by Sin on "Kiss" by DavidVale
