Comments by All Members
- "..love this..not much of a meaning i got from this, but your source...seems you knw how to speak your soul...nicely done"
Posted by Unknown on "Writerblock I" by Storm
- "crushing,delicate impact,as if the bubble was made of cyanide,the ending pulls this work through the breakpoint,intense work as always"
Posted by Anth on "Writerblock I" by Storm
- "I really am crying you know...my words will never express anything...nothing that i want to express...why you? why you of all the people in the world? but there is no answer..."
Posted by Solace on "Writerblock I" by Storm
- "I like the cadence to this, in fact I couldn't help but think of music going alon with it while I read silently"
Posted by Derelict Dream on "Lullaby" by Storm
- "Like hammerfall at a forge, relentless and pounding...Third stanza is powerful indeed...You grasp of english is impeccable, sometimes i truly do envy you..."
Posted by Solace on "Cenotaph" by Storm
- "extreme difference from you here,but masterfully so,great flow rhyme and style"
Posted by Anth on "Cenotaph" by Storm
- "But damage can be healed...Hela...Where the darkness is darkest your light shines brightest...Solace..."
Posted by Solace on "Collage of a Mind" by Storm
- "Trapped in this stagnation, unsolved riddles, disintegrations...Minutiae destructions from butterfly wings...It slips by unnoticed, stealthy, your eyes close and open to the damage..."
Posted by Solace on "Collage of a Mind" by Storm
- "The collage is everywhere lena but it is all the same picture, many within a whole, you take the good with the bad and the ugly with the beautiful...equilibriums...revolutions..."
Posted by Solace on "Collage of a Mind" by Storm
- "Evolution is painful, it is gradual, it is suffering...But who is to say it is a good thing? Who is to say anything is better off somewhere else? Who is to say anything at all?"
Posted by Solace on "Collage of a Mind" by Storm
- "Those first four lines are like...the wordlessness, the image of so much that i want to burst and i dont know i'm bursting into and what for...its feeling and not understanding...its breathing but not because you choose to..."
Posted by Solace on "Collage of a Mind" by Storm
- "One of the first things I read this morning. I had to re-read it at least 3 times. Beautiful flow. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Collage of a Mind" by Storm
- "this is such an impacting write,just so much in this,as if caught in the sudden thrall in a backwards storm of thoughts, i read through this four times already,absolute brilliance"
Posted by Anth on "Collage of a Mind" by Storm
- "its like all the emotions behind all my poems truncated into one, and a very wonderful flowing one at that. the ending left me with a sorrow that was all too familiar."
Posted by Unknown on "Transparent Reflections" by Storm
- "this had my eyes darting back and forth, line for line i was caught in this vortex of thoughts. very intense. well done."
Posted by Twilight on "Closed Door" by Storm
- "this really does define almost everyone i've ever met! very well written =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Sociophobic" by Storm
- "People are strange creatures...sub-cultures of same-sameness in their differences, microcosm societal values...All about acceptance, about norms and values...abnormal..."
Posted by Solace on "Sociophobic" by Storm
- "I absolutely respect your view of individuality in this. I'm so tired of the 'shells' around me these days:) elisa"
Posted by elisa on "Sociophobic" by Storm
- "This was a well-rounded peice; the flow and message were wonderful. I like it. "
Posted by Zara Synn on "Sociophobic" by Storm
- "Wow, that was amazing. You make a great point at the end. I've thought of taking my life far too many times and I'd never looked at it like that. Thank you for the new perspective"
Posted by Nesfurata on "Everyone in pain knows how to die..." by Storm
- "This reminds me of waking up and not thinking about anything, and then realising your here and the world tumbling down in that moment...Ignorance is bliss and waking up hurts just like that train..."
Posted by Solace on "High Speed Confrontation" by Storm
- "I commented, I swear I did...Lost in the sands of time...This was wonderful Island lass, and no I will not leave a consolation comment, you deserve a good comment, not a one liner fob off *sobs*"
Posted by Solace on "High Speed Confrontation" by Storm
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