Comments by All Members
- "Just entertaining your idea, IF I ever leave, make me come back...I dont care how you'd manage it, as long as you did...Life without you now would be like a life without air..."
Posted by Solace on "Transparent Reflections" by Storm
- "Feed until theres nothing but a dried up husk, till shade is gone and life pale and sallow...I deny you of nothing I can give, when every day is less without you...I dont know what to say"
Posted by Solace on "Transparent Reflections" by Storm
- "this really forcing the feelings forwards,some outstanding parts and an overall intensity ever present in your works"
Posted by Anth on "Transparent Reflections" by Storm
- "this poem has a nursery rhyme quality to it which is really awesome because of the themes you are expressing--whether that was intentional or not--excellent job."
Posted by Northstar on "Lullaby" by Storm
- "god..how simple thing called love can turn to hate...seems we can never hate another trully unless we once loved them...i will be reading more of your work..nicely done :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Hate Me" by Storm
- "You are maturing fast as a writer indeed, perhaps soon you will be more adept at me with english you've already far surpassed a majority of poets on this one... :)"
Posted by Solace on "Dancing to silenced silent screams." by Storm
- "I was stunned as i read this...The first stanza was brilliantly wrought especially followed by the second...Your mixture of wisdom and violence bemuses me as always"
Posted by Solace on "Dancing to silenced silent screams." by Storm
- "Storm.. this is absolutely incredible.. something special.. a quiet power showered through this as I read it, it's beyond words... the fifth stanza, summed up how I feel, perfectly. Absolutely astounding, I'm truly stunned."
Posted by Lynaes on "Everyone in pain knows how to die..." by Storm
- "intense,,,intesnse thoughts feeling and imagery,flowed perfectly,like a stream of thought,with some really insopired original parts,some of the imagery and the way its told is close to the actual feeling,overwhhelming , great great work"
Posted by Anth on "Dancing to silenced silent screams." by Storm
- "useless...This writhes with a melancholy and listless flow and a sense of solitude and despair. I told you I liked it and I stick by it...One of your best writes, if not THE best..."
Posted by Solace on "Everyone in pain knows how to die..." by Storm
- "This is of a new sense of depth...The title is the crux, the conclusion, a symbol of resignation and yet a rise above it...Tiger once told me that those who see the road suffer more...He was right...Your better off alive and suffering, than dead and usele"
Posted by Solace on "Everyone in pain knows how to die..." by Storm
- "I felt like i was in the dark being stalked by something when I read this. Great work."
Posted by Rebirth on "Closed Door" by Storm
- "there is despair, within your few words,you have described a maze that many cannot describe..........urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "Closed Door" by Storm
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